My First Poetry About Love

What is love?

Finding the words for a poem
trying to fit it all together
making every word count witha powerful punch.
Then she speaks.
Your thoughts
your emotions
all about to be written down
erased from existanse
never to be found again
Only to be replaced
by bigger
and better

What is love?

Small talk
small talk
Thinking of little tiny jokes
To advance your relationship
A micro percent
Small tall eventually a way
to hear your loves laugh
to enlighten your day

What is love?

The mind is a feeble thing
It tells you how to live
What 2+2 is
But what happens when your love
becomes your mind
8 times 8
Equals your loves name

What is love?

Having your life all planned out
You know exactly
Where your going from here
Your going here
But shes going there
Your dreams
Your hopes
Erased
Because you want to stay
With your love
And when your creating new dreams
You can finally answer the question

What is love?

Dx4lifebreakitdown Dx4lifebreakitdown
18-21, M
2 Responses Apr 12, 2007

Wow......terrifically written.....opened my mind in a new way...thanks! "And when your creating new dreams,you can finally answer the question",.

VERY GOOD POEM!! i love it!!