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I I'm More Creative While In Motion

Transient Thoughts

By: Ambivilent
Written on February 17th, 2010
Age: 56-60 , Male
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  • 0fairytalePrincess

    you're very much welcome, Marc.

    Nov 10, 2010
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  • Ambivilent

    Nice! Thank you for your thoughts and a great poem.........Marc

    Nov 9, 2010
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  • 0fairytalePrincess

    your emotion is being affected by the things which are currently present around you....I remember when I was in a church and I saw the sunrays peeping through the windows..suddenly my thoughts dwell on the effect of sunrise and sundown to my life.

    sunrise welcomes a new tomorrow

    sundown ends a day of sorrow

    tonight I wont cry on my pillow

    because the next morning

    is another time to borrow

    for me to be happy and be glad

    forgetting everything that make me sad.

    Nov 9, 2010
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  • Ambivilent

    Maybe you have a point there? Why not? There are many things that affect thoughts. I know when I used to work-out with weights, afterwards I seemed to think much more clearly. Just sharper, like ya say.

    Feb 19, 2010
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