14 Pills And A Gummy Vitamin

I've never posted/ joined a forum to express my many issues. Please let me know what you think about this poem. I just wrote it. It expresses my frustration of how doctors just fling medications to people instead of really identifying their problems. Do they even work?? How can you tell what helps and what doesn't... simply put, I'm over-medicated... I feel like the lady in "Grandma's Boy" who for meals doesn't eat food; instead she makes smiley faces with her 30 odd something pills. Oh, and 14 is just some of them... Sorry for the rant!!

14 pills and a gummy vitamin
By niffer11881


2 small yellow dots, my hand stops.
Settle down, stop, and make sure you don’t think… C13

1 white little sweet tart, if taken each day should help the sandman send REM way…RAM8

2 blue diamonds, 1 you may cut in half…
Maintenance to relieve, the ever excessively excessive…7248 9 &3…

2 elliptical golden SSRI’s to make potential uplifting light, once again be seen in my eyes…G4910

Goldenrod Yellow, LU Y17, 3 of these to help make internal sprite’s go away…

ML 1, resembles a blue Tart & Tiny
Breathing now made possible from one little candy…

T3 and T4 are on the fritz; this requires a JSP514 to make the metabolic fix…

Symmetrical and alluring like the eyes of a cat. 2 Ferrous Sulfate magically make Anemia vacate…

My Tyrannosaurs Rex; tasty, gummy, and sometimes red, orange, or blue… takes me to the end of this list… the slave of medication I daily must consume…





Please comment below.  I really need to know that I've been heard.  This is so difficult for me.
niffer11881 niffer11881
31-35
1 Response Dec 3, 2012

My 11 meds (plus a drab khaki multi) and I hear you.