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I Lack Faith In Humanity

The Aurora Borealis

By: Wanderartist
Written on August 4th, 2010
Age: 31-35 , Male
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    KingNothing90

    Greetings. I hope you are still available (since it was some time ago you wrote this). How you started this story was... Superb? Yes! I think that is a very fitting word! Your tale begins with you, wanting to see the beautiful aurora borealis, you're all set. Your mind filled with wonder and joy, and then it is all ruined. Cigarette smoke, loud unnecessary noise, beer bottles and other filth tossed all over the place. In short: The Walking Dead have arrived. At least there is not much of a difference between zombies and humanity if you ask me.

    The last part of your story really gets to me, in good and "bad" ways (and do I love it!).
    "Dreamers, scientists, and those who are lost in beauty of the universe are becoming few." Yes! LOST indeed! These words almost makes me weep.. So far I have only lost myself in beautiful music, and it is something I will never forget. There is such a difference in just being there and just seeing it happen, and in being there and actually FEELING it happen inside you.

    It is fascinating how so many small and seemingly pointless things can get you down. But it is also fascinating how so many small things can make such a difference. Sometimes, these small things I think are the things which keeps me going. Perhaps I am a lot more misanthropic than you, but this little story of yours made me think a lot, feel a lot. And for that I Thank You!

    Sep 18, 2012
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    ijensen

    I made my avatar by rendering an image of an Aurora Borealis against a superimposed background, to pay tribute to that wonder of creation. I agree; too many people are too locked into their daily lives to notice what lies beyond the periphery of the mundane. It takes light 8 +/- minutes to reach us from the sun before bombarding us with photons, and yet how many people have taken the time just in the past week to marvel at the moon? How many people these days listen to the 17 year cicadas that live for only a few months on the surface of a tree? How many people even know the lifespan of a cicada? There are so many things to be amazed by, and so few who are amazed.

    Nov 2, 2011
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    5BlueRoses

    "We do not truly see what we travel to see" - quite true, I think too many people travel just to be able to say they had been there. That doesn't just apply to travelling either, but to many of the things we do, what we buy, who we know. So many don't appreciate things for what they are, but instead for what others think of them.

    Jun 17, 2011
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    alexlevelxela

    Well said, the most interesting of observations. People that are able to appreciate the beauty and wonder of our world are so few and so rare. 95% of people born on this earth are here merely to breed and sustain the human race, while the other few, are born to lead, create, understand, explore and utter a new word, although these people are few, their presence is felt. They are amoung us and will never be forgotten. Let the stars remain far above the earth.

    Jan 24, 2011
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