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The Teardrop Prison

By: RavenDelcor
Written on June 1st, 2012
Age: 56-60 , Male
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  • Vignette

    A lovely poem, containing our emotions. I love how you describe the teardrop as "retaining surface tension." As if the delicate skin of that tear were entrusted to hold back a tidal wave of deep feelings rolling through the ocean, crashing onto shore, bursting through that delicate portal into another world.

    Jun 7, 2012
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