The gift by Carie Ann

The smell of smoke was filling the village sounds of screaming and violent yelling was everywhere. I looked around to see what was going on men in odd clothing was ravaging the village burning houses children was being slaughtered in the street blood soaking the dirt road I watched in my hiding place in my attic my tiny bob-cat kitten was crouched under my dress. I heard a voice and I turn slowly my grandmother was standing by the other window her eyes filled with tear she turned to me and said " They have arrived Anna they are looking for the gifted ones you must escape before they find you" the elderly lady with white hair picked up a burlap bag and opened a old oak chest and put clothes and a pouch of money inside along with a box. "Take this and go Anna climb out the window" I looked to grandmother "No I won't leave you!"
She looked at me with tears in her eyes " You must!" The kitten pawed at my dress and I picked him up and put him in the bag he mewed in protest.

(How did I do? I wrote this)
TeenageWriterGirl TeenageWriterGirl
16-17, F
2 Responses Aug 16, 2014

Very good!

Wow colorful and gripping :)

Haha it's a mess