Coming Rain

Lowered clouds
threaten coming rain
gulls head inland
sdbear sdbear
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2 Responses Jul 11, 2010

Thanks for your haiku respons. It's a nice counterpoint to mine. I was at the beach (I live in Trinidad) early on an overcast day. The clouds sat on the hills surrounding the bay, and rain could be seen in the distance. Then groups of gulls began to wheel inland, a tangled cloud of large birds, wing to wing.

Cleansing rain <br />
Wets my face-<br />
Nature weeps gently