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I Like Quotes and Poems

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By: MiracleWhipTrickster
Written on January 31st, 2011
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • MiracleWhipTrickster

    Lmfaoo @ Italian guapo and the next Eminem, oh you're to funny =P. Thanks a lot Amelle =)

    Feb 20, 2011
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  • MiracleWhipTrickster

    Lol well what sort of prize do you want> =P



    I'm sure you are a better writer than me in other areas, like essays I always paraphrased the whole thing, I was too lazy to actually sit down and write the whole thing lol =P. Poetry was always just expressing emotion to me, just write how you feel and you can't go wrong =)

    Feb 20, 2011
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  • CrazyHippieChick

    LOL. I am such a slacker xD



    YAY. I'm YOU'RE FAVORITE LOSER. I deserve a prize. *pats herself on the back*



    And pshhhhhhhh. You need to TEACH ME how to write. I could NEVER, EVER write that well.



    It makes me super jelly >.:)

    Feb 20, 2011
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  • MiracleWhipTrickster

    You're seriously slacking!! lol jkjk and you're not a loser, if you are than you're my loser =P



    I always loved reading it but i was never really good at writing it, I still don't think I am but I admit i've gotten better. I don't think I could take a course i'd be all like ''umm yeah about that, i'm f@cking lost" lol. Funny thing is I really have to feel what i'm writing, I can't force it or else it comes out bland and all fake like. Thank you chica =)

    Feb 20, 2011
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  • CrazyHippieChick

    I am such a bad stalker/ creeper.



    How come I never saw this?!



    Gosh I am such a loser..even when it comes to be a creepo >.<



    Anyways. This shitt was beautiful. How dare I call it shitt. D: I mean this POEM was beautiful.



    I hate poetry. No, I do actually LOVE reading it, but writing it proves too difficult. Last year, I spent time doing a poetry course and by the end, I was like WOAH. Writing poetry is a pain in the nalgas. There's so MUCH to learn on manner, open form vs. closed form, paying attention to the meter from a simple iambic variation to dactylic, yada, yada...



    Point is writing poetry is difficult, but you do it well. Too well. I loved this.

    Feb 20, 2011
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  • MiracleWhipTrickster

    lol thank you, it's what came to mind this morning.

    Jan 31, 2011
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  • chaoticmae

    Brilliant. I love this. You really wrote this? Bravo dear. Good job(:

    Jan 31, 2011
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  • MiracleWhipTrickster

    Thank you.



    Yeah that seems to be the case today, sorry you are going through the same. I feel as though the lack of sleep of lately has really not been helping. You're absolutely right, baby steps, it's the only way out of these present state of emotions.



    I know you are, and I for you, thank you.

    Jan 31, 2011
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  • lisa36

    *sitting next to you and holding your hand*



    Beautiful poem. And the emotion comes through brilliantly.



    I'm sorry you are feeling this way. I've got the same feeling. Sitting here. Long sigh. Wondering when the pain will come out fully as it hibernates and just keeps me in a melancholy state. Sounds as though this is the case for you too.



    We must get through it. Baby steps. One little tiny baby step at a time.



    Always here for you my dear friend.

    Jan 31, 2011
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