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Today

I never said I was good at writing them, i'm probably bad at it, nut eh give me a break I wrote it off of 3 hours of sleep in a sort of blah mood.

I hurt today, but I can not figure out why.
I tried to cry today, but not a single drop fell from my eye.
If I was to say that i'm okay today, that would be one big fabricated lie.
I'm seeking a way to escape this today, all I can do is try.
I can't seem to find the answer today, so tonight i'll look to the sky.
Maybe by the end of today, i'll kiss this rut goodbye.
I've made an attempt to get it all out from within today, but all I could muster was a lonely sigh.
By the end of today, I might just lose the fight and finally cry....
MiracleWhipTrickster MiracleWhipTrickster 18-21, M 8 Responses Jan 31, 2011

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Lmfaoo @ Italian guapo and the next Eminem, oh you're to funny =P. Thanks a lot Amelle =)

Lol well what sort of prize do you want> =P<br />
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I'm sure you are a better writer than me in other areas, like essays I always paraphrased the whole thing, I was too lazy to actually sit down and write the whole thing lol =P. Poetry was always just expressing emotion to me, just write how you feel and you can't go wrong =)

LOL. I am such a slacker xD<br />
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YAY. I'm YOU'RE FAVORITE LOSER. I deserve a prize. *pats herself on the back*<br />
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And pshhhhhhhh. You need to TEACH ME how to write. I could NEVER, EVER write that well.<br />
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It makes me super jelly >.:)

You're seriously slacking!! lol jkjk and you're not a loser, if you are than you're my loser =P<br />
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I always loved reading it but i was never really good at writing it, I still don't think I am but I admit i've gotten better. I don't think I could take a course i'd be all like ''umm yeah about that, i'm f@cking lost" lol. Funny thing is I really have to feel what i'm writing, I can't force it or else it comes out bland and all fake like. Thank you chica =)

I am such a bad stalker/ creeper.<br />
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How come I never saw this?!<br />
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Gosh I am such a loser..even when it comes to be a creepo >.&lt;<br />
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Anyways. This shitt was beautiful. How dare I call it shitt. D: I mean this POEM was beautiful.<br />
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I hate poetry. No, I do actually LOVE reading it, but writing it proves too difficult. Last year, I spent time doing a poetry course and by the end, I was like WOAH. Writing poetry is a pain in the nalgas. There's so MUCH to learn on manner, open form vs. closed form, paying attention to the meter from a simple iambic variation to dactylic, yada, yada...<br />
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Point is writing poetry is difficult, but you do it well. Too well. I loved this.

lol thank you, it's what came to mind this morning.

Thank you.<br />
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Yeah that seems to be the case today, sorry you are going through the same. I feel as though the lack of sleep of lately has really not been helping. You're absolutely right, baby steps, it's the only way out of these present state of emotions.<br />
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I know you are, and I for you, thank you.

*sitting next to you and holding your hand*<br />
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Beautiful poem. And the emotion comes through brilliantly.<br />
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I'm sorry you are feeling this way. I've got the same feeling. Sitting here. Long sigh. Wondering when the pain will come out fully as it hibernates and just keeps me in a melancholy state. Sounds as though this is the case for you too. <br />
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We must get through it. Baby steps. One little tiny baby step at a time. <br />
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Always here for you my dear friend.