It’s the unforgettable night of our red wine
You wink at me after we drink and dine
I feel at ease cause am with a friend
With a gentle nudge  you hold my hand

My heart is in a flutter  with such sweet dance
Hearing the soft music, this is a rare chance
Swaying and touching with your loving arms
A moment in a lifetime, endearing remembrance

Am so confused if I'll yawn or frown
Will my spirit be up or down?
As you softly whisper, “can I kiss you this  time?”
I smile, conveying it’s certainly fine
With just one kiss, hope you ’re all mine.

The kiss you give might have to linger more
Seems like you can't simply just let go
Am trying to resist..Is this why we're here for?
Is this leading us to a forbidden door....?

Have to softly whisper, end the lingering kiss,
If we parted, that I would terribly miss
This is making me both wild and tame
I can put away the thoughts of shame
With your arms that hold me, I feel so insane
Wishing we can love each other all the same.
4BlackForest 4BlackForest
36-40, F
14 Responses Jul 19, 2010

mmmmm very nice.


Omg... omg... wow... i just realized i am breathing so hard... wow... 4blackforest just drips with sensuality. Oh my.

Lol...funny man!

Red wine , several cheeses and good company ... nothing better 🍷🌞

best of time, my friend!

excellent poem Miss Forest..ty for the read..Lj

thank you for appreciating.

Intriguing and complex, lovely way to start a story, but there's sooo much more, isn't there?

the dance ended all of a

hmmnn..your imagination tickles..let's celebrate, it's my birthday 2 days!

so, do you mean...follow the leader?...let's walk together as friends so we can discover such mystery.'re so sensual and romantic.

thank you..with so much frustration if you read between the

oh really? a poet so I almost always say the nicest rhymes......(smiles)

absolutely!..thoroughly said.

thanks..this one had been really written delicately straight from the heart..with a lot of nudge, wink, yawn and frown..hahhaha

When you write from the heart, we can all feel your emotions. You're a great talent, hopelessly romantic, and incredibly creative. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.