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Clarity In Still Water

By: valiant62
Written on January 3rd, 2013
By: valiant62
Age: 36-40 , Male
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  • openwindows

    We stand hand in hand here my darling...two flames now one.

    Mar 29
    2 likes
    • valiant62

      the flickering flame brings out the dancer in us... the clarity of the water and the invigoration of the passion of fire, binding us with ethereal sovereign glue... the desire to be desired and the realisation that we are continues to fuel the dual flame furnace.

      Mar 30
      1 like
  • thesphinxess

    I look at the water and its stillness reflect the world perfectly
    I put a finger on it and ripple appear that fade into the reflection of the universe

    I look at the fire and its movement show me my dreams and hopes
    But if i try to touch them right now
    They will burn me whole

    you cannot touch me, for now, fire tells me
    Feel my heat but you cannot touch me

    I wish one day water and fire can live in me..
    And i can go free..
    water unburned
    without killing the fire.

    Jan 5
    2 likes
  • lookingwindow

    Nature's ethereal crystal ball indeed..

    Jan 5
    1 like
  • chaoticsoul

    I read this and, enthralled, read it again. How beautiful!

    Jan 4
    1 like