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I Like To Write Poetry

Breath

By: dragonwaters
Written on August 29th, 2011
In the afterglow of the dance,
a peace and calm sets in.
Breathing your breath I feel as one.
Thank you for being my Lover.
I was thirsty and you let me drink of your rapture.
I sit in a trance of delight,
as the night surrounds my bliss.
You are the musician who makes me sing.
Your essence is a part of my heart



By: dragonwaters
Age: 56-60 , Female
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5 responses
  • avatarunknown
    avatarunknown

    i really like the way you put words together.

    Jan 25
    1 like
    • dragonwaters
      dragonwaters

      Thank you, some days are better than others...

      Jan 27
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  • SleepingTiger
    SleepingTiger

    very romantic and sweet!

    May 3, 2012
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  • paco35
    paco35

    :-)

    Oct 4, 2011
    1 like
  • dragonwaters
    dragonwaters

    Thank you for your compliments... this poem is unique to my writing style with intent...

    I usually am a rhyming metered poet... not fitting for the captured moment... LoveT.

    Sep 5, 2011
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