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The Stars They Burn Out.

A man cannot be a king when he has no castle.
A bird it cannot fly without its wings.
A dog cannot be trained without a master.
A song cannot be sung when there's no one there  to sing.
The world is always flat in our dreams
and nothing is ever what it seams.
In the end , the people scream and shout
and the stars, they all burn out.
We are right back where we started in the end.
kidkeith kidkeith 51-55, M 10 Responses Mar 11, 2012

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Very true.This is interesting and encouraging.Lets press up up up.This is really good.

Very true.This is interesting and encouraging.Lets press up up up.This is really good.

it makes it all seem natural. you are a very good poet!

very goodkid.write some more.

I find this very moving. Thanks KidK :-D

i admire your words Keith xx

wonderful

As we come full circle- thank you sir...

Jesus had no castle yet the Jews and Romans crucified him under a sign that read "The King of the Jews."<br />
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Dogs train themselves how to hunt and avoid danger - who and what to trust and who and what to fear.<br />
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As for we end up where we began I doubt this because my parents no longer control my life like when I was young. Now my life is controlled by my wife and kids and whomever decides to hire me.<br />
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Still you touched a nerve in my soul/heart and for that I thank you, friend.

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that's really good, thank you