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I Like To Write Poetry

The Stars They Burn Out.

By: kidkeith
Written on March 11th, 2012
By: kidkeith
Age: 51-55 , Male
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11 responses
  • mamboleo

    Very true.This is interesting and encouraging.Lets press up up up.This is really good.

    Sep 15, 2012
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  • mamboleo

    Very true.This is interesting and encouraging.Lets press up up up.This is really good.

    Sep 15, 2012
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  • luckylassie

    it makes it all seem natural. you are a very good poet!

    Jun 18, 2012
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  • baydog2

    very goodkid.write some more.

    May 28, 2012
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  • hillbillycrone

    I find this very moving. Thanks KidK :-D

    Apr 20, 2012
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  • Missmathematics

    i admire your words Keith xx

    Apr 17, 2012
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  • potterphoenix24

    wonderful

    Mar 12, 2012
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  • yrral32

    As we come full circle- thank you sir...

    Mar 11, 2012
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  • HallieParker

    Jesus had no castle yet the Jews and Romans crucified him under a sign that read "The King of the Jews."



    Dogs train themselves how to hunt and avoid danger - who and what to trust and who and what to fear.



    As for we end up where we began I doubt this because my parents no longer control my life like when I was young. Now my life is controlled by my wife and kids and whomever decides to hire me.



    Still you touched a nerve in my soul/heart and for that I thank you, friend.

    Mar 11, 2012
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  • usefulstory

    Useful stories



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    Mar 11, 2012
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    • kidkeith

      that's really good, thank you

      Mar 11, 2012
      1 like