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I Like To Write Poetry

My Journey

By: lyricaldemise
Written on August 1st, 2012
Age: 36-40
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  • drlesmoore

    Wow. That was deep. It is unfortunate that people cause people so much pain. When I was growing up, I thought that older people were able to see me and help me to develope into the person that I was put her on earth to be. Espeacially those older people who were closest to me, my family.



    But it doesn't work that way. Not in the real world. Most adults are looking so desperately for their own happiness until they don't even know where or how to began to assist young people to find their own path. That could be a real rewarding career for someone.



    Preachers and teachers claim to have the answer, but they personalize their God to the point that they try to make God in their own image instead of the othe way around. And if God is really one who punish for sin with an eternal, burning hell, than he to is a hipocrite if he claims to be a loving, caring and forgiving God.



    Yes, you might be on track with being born into a hell. This world is hell, it just isn't on fire yet. But I see the light and I feel the heat. Brace yourself, and find as much happiness as you can before you die.



    Enjoy your journey. Life is short.

    Aug 5, 2012
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