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10 Things I Hate About You

I hate the times I nudge and poke
I hate the nothingness except feeling a choke.

I hate when you say the sweetest thing
I hate when it makes me crazy spinning.

I hate that I miss our laughs and quacks
I hate swinging blindly with my whacks.

I hate that you are nowhere near
I hate waiting when you'll ever appear.

I hate when you can't find time
I hate that I can friggin' rhyme.

And in spite the fact that I hate ten things about you
Wallowing at times as I stare at my tattoo
I can come up with more things to hate
Debating with myself and carry the damn weight
I close my eyes and smile at the end of the day
No matter what I hate, I so like you anyway.

Sylphy Sylphy 41-45, F 3 Responses Nov 10, 2012

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It does not matter that you can't rhyme. This almost rhyme came from your heart and it makes perfect sense. And at the end of the we smile and forgive and forget the pain of the day and like anyway.

Uhm, but I did rhyme, CMA. It's sometimes stuck in your head once you start rhyming.
And the forgiveness... I only need to forgive myself for feeling the hate.

It is very hard to hate anything at the end of the day

As soon as I pass out, then yeah... but then I wake up a few hours or so... and I sooo hate that!

*hugs Tas for the rate*

I like that you rhymed so nice
I like that your story is so nice. <------ (see how I did that rhyming thing there)
Sometimes all I eat is rice.
Its nice.
I like you anway.

*then heaves a sack*
*rice to eat and play*
I like you anyway. ;P

*broken back*
*can't whack back*
*why am I laying on a railway track*
I like you anway

Good thing it doesn't cost anything
To say liking you anyway with a zing
Ouch with your back
Faerie's shoulder out of whack.