A Girl's First Time

As you lie back your muscles tighten. You put him off for a while searching for an excuse, but he refuses to be swayed as he approaches you.

He asks if you're afraid and you shake your head bravely. He has had more experience, but it's the first time his finger has found the right place.

He probes deeply and you shiver; your body tenses; but he's gentle like he promised he'd be.

He looks deeply within your eyes and tells you to trust him-he's done this many times before.

His cool smile relaxes you and you open wider to give him more room for an easy entrance. You begin to plead and beg him to hurry, but he slowly takes his time, wanting to cause you as little pain as possible. As he presses closer, going deeper, you feel the tissue give way; pain surges throughout your body and you feel the slight trickle of blood as he continues. He looks at you concerned and asks you if it's too painful. Your eyes are filled with tears but you shake your head and nod for him to go on. He begins going in and out with skill but you are now too numb to feel him within you.

After a few moments, you feel something bursting within you and he pulls it out of you, you lay panting, glad to have it over. He looks at you and smiling warmly, tells you, with a chuckle; that you have been his most stubborn yet most rewarding experience.

You smile and thank your dentist. After all, it was your first time to have a tooth pulled.

Naughty, Naughty!

Excuse me, What were you thinking'? LMAO
IamJody IamJody
22-25, F
17 Responses Jan 17, 2013

.l. .c. lol

ROFL great work and very very funny :0) thank you for the laughter in my day today :0) hugs

Lol hugs

Dentist is exactly what I was thinking. I've an odd sense of humor ;-)

hahaha.... you got me there.

You, my friend, are a comical genius. Awesome story.

It felt so real :-) Like my tooth was the one drawing blood lol

Lol I was the like "what the hell I am doing in this place in EP" wow!! Haha

So shocked!!! It was very entertaining!!

Hahahahaha! You got me there! Nice one!


Very clever!

got me dazed! hehehe! good one!:D

HAhahha i was about to close the tab when i first sensed it was something "above average topic", u got me there! haha

Lolol!!!!!!!!! Mee too lol!!!!

hahaha i was so embarassed with myself hahahah

I loved it lmao I was one with a naughty mind very good keep writing your good at it

This isn't mine to take credit for, I found it on jokeyard.com ...They did do a great job on it..

Oh ok lol ill have to visit that site then still good in good tast to share the story with us and for that I thank you

This type of writing is called "Imagery". I love it very creative!! I wrote something similar back in high school. odd enough, it also was about the dentist!! great job! keep writing. Very picturesque!!

This isn't mine to take credit for, I found it on jokeyard.com ...They did do a great job on it..

Good job.


That was well done, and funny.

Lmao I knew it wasn't going to be what I was thinking but didnt know it was a dentist! Nice one!

Lmao thank you :)