A Part Of A StoryThis is part of a story that i have been writing for a while know.. i was wondering what people thought of it.. Please do comment
“Calm down Rose.” He whispers to me. I grind my teeth together knowing that I’m close to losing my control. “Yes Rose calm down, you don’t want to get hurt do you?” Kallen asks and then I lose it. I lose my control and shift forms faster than they thought and then I was running. Running as fast as I could away from Kallen and from Sam. Why, why did this happen to me? I didn’t want any of this. That’s when I caught a familiar sent. And then I was following it. Home. I shifted forms so that they wouldn’t attack me on site, but when I got there I fell to my knees as I looked down at the still form of my father. I begin to cry “NOOOOOO!” I scream at the top of my lungs and then I’m lying down beside him. Crying. Oh daddy, how could you leave me? I miss you daddy please come back. “Daddy” I whisper to myself “I will avenge you daddy. I promise.” I hugs myself as the light begins to fade, I hear a sound from behind me and quickly see the dagger and get up to face whoever was coming. That’s when I noticed men on horses coming my way. So I yell “GO AWAY!” they mustn’t have seen me until then because they stop. “Who goes there?” the one in the lead replies.
WiseLily 16-17, F 0 Sep 24, 2012