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Rise Above Imperfections {what A Perfect Person Is}

By: Beyourself12
Written on April 10th, 2012
Age: 18-21 , Female
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  • Wicked21

    Words cannot describe my utter pleasure of reading your story and re-reading it all over again. You truly are a wonderful person who deserve everything good in life. And I should tell you that you ARE a great writer that have this gift to write so easily what you have in mind.

    Apr 11, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      That's because I'm your friend/sister hun. ;) A friend of the ''wow-ing'' writer is a writer :)

      Apr 11, 2012
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    • Wicked21

      My dear, dear and oh so dear lemon drop. I could never be or feel like a "wow-ing" writer except if you were by my side and encouraging me.

      Apr 11, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      It's always my pleasure to stay beside you forever :)

      Apr 12, 2012
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  • Difum

    Very nice and insightful!! Are you sure your age group is 13-15? This makes you sound much more mature than that. It is well said.

    Apr 10, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      Thank you..that's so sweet from you.And yeah I'm only 15 :)

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Difum

      lol 15 going on 25!!

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      Haha! Thanks a lot. And it's just me,a person who's trying to discover the world !

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Difum

      I hope you are writing things like this for a class in school.. It does show some great insight and an ability to put your thoughts down on paper.

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      I like to let people benefit from my thoughts and writings but the most important thing is that to enjoy the thing you are doing as long as it is on the right way,and I enjoy writing.

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      And p.s: You are a wise,nice , you have a great personality, and trust me, you are special.

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Difum

      That's good. Do you have an english class or literature class? Teachers would love to see this talent.

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      Well,I'm just a student that is thirsty for knowledge.And if I had one some day,you'll be the first one that I'm gonna tell,God's willing .

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Difum

      Thank you for those kind words. But you are not "just a student". You do have a latent talent to put thoughts on paper and allow a reader to visualize what you are saying. Don't be afraid to push the envelope with this and get some teachers involved.

      Apr 10, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      To be honest, I'm not afraid to, but my only purpose is to write,because I love writing :) And thanks for your advice,I'm gonna work on it..

      Apr 11, 2012
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    • Difum

      Love what you do and do what you love. A great old saying. Fly with this. Maybe writing is your future.

      Apr 11, 2012
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    • Beyourself12

      I love writing but I prefer to be a biomedical more than writing :)

      Apr 11, 2012
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