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The Sea Saw

By: anuragch11
Written on February 25th, 2011
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • ceywat

    So does the sea have power over the cloud, and the young cloud shouldn't have challenged the sea? Awesome, I liked it, thanx 4 sharing. : )

    Aug 23, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      i have used kind of sarcasm here...the cloud represents a weaker section of the society who doesnt have a right to ask questions to the stronger big guns....if someone tries to stand and challenge their monopoly.....he should go down in front of their power.....:)....thank you

      Aug 24, 2012
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    • ceywat

      I see that, thank you for getting back to me. : )

      Aug 24, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      the pleasure was mine....thank you...:)

      Aug 24, 2012
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    • ceywat

      You have a lot of wisdom and knowledge for such a "young soul," I admire that and am sure you are putting that to good use. : )

      Aug 24, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      wow! that's huge.....i don't know about other things but i sure do try to be a good person at core.....:)

      Aug 24, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      also read other posts of mine...you may like them too....:)

      Aug 24, 2012
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  • 2011A

    I like this poem. You show great promise, young man. Do continue. And learn and grow. I like your style. I dabble in poetry. Lately I cannot focus-too much strife in my life! Thank you for this.

    Aug 10, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      thanx a lot for appreciation......mam...:)...

      Aug 10, 2012
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    • 2011A

      I am not your grandmother, hon. You are welcome.

      Aug 10, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      ha ha...u are well older than me both in age and talents...u deserve respect...:)

      Aug 10, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Hmm...It wasn't forever ago that I was your age, kiddo. Respect me by calling me friend or Cynthia.

      Aug 10, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      honour me by adding to ur circle cynthia....:D....

      Aug 10, 2012
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    • anuragch11

      hey and please read my latest poem in the group...."alienated"....

      Aug 10, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Honour me by accepting...It shall be so, hon. Kisses...

      Aug 10, 2012
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  • anuragch11

    hey thanx......i mean do u know this is the first comment i have ever received on any of my poems...that too of appreciation ...thanx a lot again......:)

    Apr 21, 2011
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  • AmidstTheShadows

    wow,

    that was a wonderful poem.

    it appears like you are a born poet.

    you did an excellent job by writing this.

    i simply love it.

    and i am specially fond of the SEA.

    wow again!

    Apr 21, 2011
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