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I Love Poetry

A Poem I Wrote

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Written on September 29th, 2011
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Age: 26-30
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    Azrael193

    Very Spiritual and Esoteric.....I thought it was beautifully written! With, many different meanings that could be applied depending upon the context one desires to put it in...you have talent!

    Dec 19, 2011
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    Shayla26bonnie

    ELOQUENCE.

    Your words hit me hard

    Causing me pain that is so unbearable

    A pain that could make even the strongest men fall to theirr knees and beg you to stop

    But not me

    No i would never want this pain to stop

    This feeling of torture you've buried inside of my soul

    Dont ever take this feeling away

    The pain is proof

    Proof that hell does exist

    Proof that our love once lingered around earth before it disapeared

    Proof that death cant be as bad

    and proof that Monsters can exist as well

    So I think I'll keep the heart ache

    and i guess I'll suffer the emptiness inside for as long as all eternity

    And I'll keep suffering until the torture is over and its my turn for revenge.

    I promise

    I'll keep this pain close to my heart..

    For efinity times efinity

    Just waiting until my time is up

    So I can sink down into hell's fire

    And burn every piece of your pain away.

    10v3 = <3

    Oct 31, 2011
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    ItsWindy

    Great emotional writing.

    Oct 19, 2011
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    LoneWolfWanderer

    You have a beautiful mind..

    Oct 13, 2011
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    Yeshmanthi

    Lovely!

    Oct 7, 2011
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    BenderBoy

    I have wondered this world sad and alone.

    In search of a place from which to call home.

    Have you asked the same questions, for I need to know.

    Not a house nor place to stay.

    But a home.

    Oct 7, 2011
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    BrutMystik

    Beautiful idea...oh the gravity of others...

    Sep 30, 2011
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    bigloozer

    ...Very Deep....I like it....here's A little poem I threw together, an attempt of self evaluation. hope you like it.



    Another sleepless night, I'm wide awake,



    wrestling with my internal fight, struggling to do what's right.



    Lying awake I can't help but wonder, why my silver lining



    is filled with Thunder.



    I feel broken and empty..and now I wonder



    who am I supposed to be



    when everything good was taken from me?



    I am weary of trying to understand my fate,



    trapped with thoughts I can't escape,



    losing this tug of war between love and hate



    I'm not the Man I need to be



    Hiding in the shadows of the empty,and broken me.



    Yeah, you see me smile, but never see my face



    As I walk alone down my twisted path of fate.



    I wear a mask with a smile, and yes, I'll dance, this dance for awhile.



    I've walked though flames with each mile,



    this despite my Heart's denial.



    Only God knows what I've been through



    As I gather strength to walk the high road away from you,



    Will I ever feel the Sunshine on my face



    the truth of Love or the warmth of God's Grace?



    Stuck here in my empty, and broken embrace.



    are my broken dreams of loathing and disgrace.



    I find myself looking back at what should have been,



    missed opportunities, and remembering when....



    Now as I lie here, my Heart is breaking, because of the path I chose



    and chances not taken.



    Knowing...The man I want to be,



    is so far away.........



    from the empty,and broken me.

    Sep 30, 2011
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      bigloozer

      thanks, I actually wrote it a little while back, put in honesty it was a 15 minute Job, just a little writing experiment.

      Sep 30, 2011
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      bluefrlife

      That was beautiful, describes exactly hoW I feel

      Oct 12, 2011
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    theheartofmemphis

    Very beautiful!

    Sep 29, 2011
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    EyzofBlue

    :)

    Sep 29, 2011
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