Sweet Pandemonium~by Me

pretty pictures of death

tangled up in bloodied bedsheets

a subtle knife

next to my busted mainline

still pumping out visions..

i thought about giving the monster a call

with my last request

but a lethal injection

wasn't going to do any dignified tricks..

no

i had to summon all the courage

i'd collected in a lifetime

which wasn't much but

just enough to carry out the final act

 

 

pitbullbeauty pitbullbeauty
31-35, F
3 Responses Mar 17, 2009

I like it.

welcome! and thanks for the comment..i believe i will use your suggestion as my poem's title, by definition it's fitting and accurately describes the emotion flowing through me at that time..thanks again!

Hi im new to this site but first i think that poem was great i really liked it, great detail.<br />
okay i was thinking that a good name for your poem could be sweet pandemonium because it talks about blood and evil desires.