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I Love to Write Poetry

Shovel At Hand

By: grayday104
Written on November 14th, 2012
Age: 22-25 , Male
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  • SkidlelyBoeBoe

    Whoa

    Apr 28
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    • grayday104

      Yeah I've been sick alot so I've had alot of time to think about Death

      Apr 28
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  • fireman03

    I'm a Vietnam veterans a part of me died over Vietnam thank you for your story it made me feel a lot better

    Mar 22
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    • grayday104

      You're very welcome glad it's helping people

      Mar 22
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  • ShineLikeJewelz

    O_O That was so amazing. I stop breathing when I read your work. Isn't it interesting we both wrote a poem about being dead. I love this and I demand you be published right now!

    Mar 6
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    • grayday104

      Yeah this one was wrote in parts I just looked at my poems one day and looked at how many involved Death and thought hmm I bet this could make an interesting ride

      Mar 6
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  • Pandas2

    Wow. Just wow I almost cried I never wanted it to end!

    Feb 18
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  • Shadowroza

    omg... this is sooo deep and the imagery is soo perfectly combined with the meaning its really good

    Feb 16
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    • grayday104

      Thanks I was worried it might be too much for the ladies

      Feb 16
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    • Shadowroza

      Ur welkies ^^ I'm not like any of those prissy vladies lolz XD

      Feb 16
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    • grayday104

      What's a vlady?

      Feb 16
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    • Shadowroza

      Typo >.>

      Feb 16
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    • grayday104

      Oh I thought it was some new slang Women are confusing

      Feb 16
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    • Shadowroza

      Yesh we are vlol xD

      Feb 16
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    • Shadowroza

      Yesh we are lol xD

      Feb 16
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  • sweetromance2

    Excellent expression.

    Feb 11
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    • grayday104

      Thank you

      Feb 11
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    • sweetromance2

      You're welcome. I hope you'll feel free to read my stories and rate me up as well.

      Feb 11
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    • grayday104

      Sure I'll check a couple out but be warned I'm blunt

      Feb 11
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    • sweetromance2

      That's alright, I'm more of an artist than a writer. However, what I wrote is true. From what I've read, you do an excellent job of painting a picture with words.

      Feb 11
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    • grayday104

      Thanks if I'm to be remembered I hope it's for that

      Feb 11
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  • BeautifulDisaster20

    I love it! Don't ever stop writing.

    Jan 10
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    • grayday104

      thanks nice to meet you

      Jan 10
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    • BeautifulDisaster20

      You too. No problem. Your poems just get better and better.

      Jan 10
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    • grayday104

      I've had lots of time to practice started when i was a couple of years younger than you

      Jan 10
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  • Darkon1side

    I love this, every poem you write just inspires me to write mine! Lol

    Jan 10
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    • grayday104

      thanks I was actually waiting for some feedback on this one

      Jan 10
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    • Darkon1side

      Well it's really great

      Jan 10
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  • Staley

    Wow! Grayday, better and better every time. Autograph?

    Dec 31, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Well I'd say yes but still trying to figure out how that works

      Dec 31, 2012
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    • Staley

      lol. Happy New Year Grayday!

      Dec 31, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Happy New Year too you!

      Dec 31, 2012
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  • thesphinxess

    wow just wow just wow

    Dec 30, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Thanks I've actually been surprised how well this has done with women

      Dec 30, 2012
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  • agnes1977

    very nice I love mythology and darkness...

    Dec 29, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Thanks I was a bit worried how well it would tie together

      Dec 29, 2012
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    • agnes1977

      well your welcome Its really good...

      Dec 29, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Only took about 2 years lol

      Dec 29, 2012
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  • fractalpterodactyl

    Yes it is a bit dark put the story is really good & I allways have a good picture of it while I'm reading your work. Nicely done :)

    Dec 28, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Thanks I think I've been working on that one for like 2 years now good thing I'm patient

      Dec 28, 2012
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    • fractalpterodactyl

      Wow that's a while that would take patients.

      Dec 28, 2012
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    • grayday104

      Yeah it's funny how my Mom is always commenting on my impatience

      Dec 28, 2012
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