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A Poem I Wrote About Friendship (may Have Submitted In Another Group Too)

In times of trouble


when all the lights go out


and the suns replaced by night


when everything has all gone wrong


 when once it was so right


when the smiles of happiness disappear


 in place you shed some tears


when you were once strong, bold as brass,


  you now are faced with fears


don't be a stranger to your friends,


 their there to lend a hand


to dry you're tears and let you know


 that they'll try to understand


don't feel alone or close the door


on everyone you know


for it's in these times of struggle


that real friendships grow 


AWUK AWUK 26-30, F 3 Responses Nov 24, 2007

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aww cute picture !! :D and nice poem too.. i liked it :)

I wrote a few songs when I was younger, but haven't done it for years, since I was about 15!! I like expressing myself through singing and poetry, but with poetry I have to be in the mood, whereas I can sing anytime :)

That poem was great. "Keep the poetry writing up, it allows us to express who we really are deep inside." Have you ever written songs? Writing poetry is a talent that not everyone has. "Keep it up ! "