Uphill Battle

Its so warm yet so cold
Its so eternal, repetitive, my broken soul
This is overwhelming, it reminds me every single time.
Like i dont know that already.
Its a endless debt to my heart
Watching me fall apart
I try so hard to forget it
but its so deep and dark.
Like a black hole in space
Can you see it on my face?
Ive always been alone
This loneliness always takes a toll
So many times ive felt like its just a waste of time
Its so persistent like it waits and get ready to attack when something goes wrong.
It never takes long.
I got a uphill battle
I can never win.

Thanks to everyone who answered my past 2 questions on here, u guys helped me on this poem :)

ShesDisturbed ShesDisturbed
22-25, F
2 Responses Dec 3, 2012

It's deep. The one thing about uphill battles is when you finally get to the top, its a beautiful view and another conquered event.

I think it has flow issues like with this line "Like i dont know that already." it brought the poem to a halt hope I wasn't too hard on you

Humm...ok...thanks for ur comment.

Your welcome