Help? I Just Need Somebody to Look At My Work!!

T hese are some short stories I've written in the past because it was when I was feeling motivated enough to do it.  Now I barely ever write and when I do I always get bad writers block.  I'm going to post quite a few things up here.  Whether you'd like to take the link I give you and copy and paste it into your web browser and read it...its totally up to you!

thatonegirl18 thatonegirl18
18-21, F
2 Responses Feb 21, 2009

hey where did you get that avatar? it looks like me before i got my spiral done!

I believe you have talent, it just needs to be sharpened. I enjoyed your stories, and I especially liked this one line in the story about your grandpa: " I was like a kid shaking a snow globe."<br />
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Thank you for sharing your stories, it takes a lot of courage to put your work out there for all to see. I wish I had that kind of courage.