Help? I Just Need Somebody to Look At My Work!!

T hese are some short stories I've written in the past because it was when I was feeling motivated enough to do it.  Now I barely ever write and when I do I always get bad writers block.  I'm going to post quite a few things up here.  Whether you'd like to take the link I give you and copy and paste it into your web browser and read it...its totally up to you!  

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1322619/bath_time.html?singlepage=true&cat=44

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1120939/always_and_forever.html?singlepage=true&cat=44

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1120893/the_strike_of_sadness.html?cat=43

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1108298/my_speech_from_last_year.html?singlepage=true&cat=42

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1108256/stairway_of_tears.html?singlepage=true&cat=44

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1104922/stairway_of_tears.html?singlepage=true&cat=44

thatonegirl18 thatonegirl18
18-21, F
2 Responses Feb 21, 2009

hey where did you get that avatar? it looks like me before i got my spiral done!

I believe you have talent, it just needs to be sharpened. I enjoyed your stories, and I especially liked this one line in the story about your grandpa: " I was like a kid shaking a snow globe."<br />
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Thank you for sharing your stories, it takes a lot of courage to put your work out there for all to see. I wish I had that kind of courage.