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I Love Words

Moment In Time

By: DIYman
Written on December 13th, 2012
By: DIYman
Age: 22-25 , Male
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    lookingwindow

    Very nice...

    Jan 8
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      DIYman

      :)

      Jan 8
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    Hongruilin

    *sighs*

    Jan 1
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    sayonaranow

    Inspirational and touching. You have captured the breath of a small miracle born from the human convition for achieving happiness. Completition.

    Dec 17, 2012
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      DIYman

      wow thank you so much; that truly means a lot to me:)

      Dec 17, 2012
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      sayonaranow

      Well, you are a natural. It is clear that words are just attracted to you to be ordered and mixed with your spirit. That, in my opinion, is what lead the path to masterpieces. Everyone can learn to read and write, but it takes a spark of genious to transform words in sentences that scrape height of divinity. The writen message is, to me, the noblest of human achievements.

      Dec 17, 2012
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      DIYman

      It's funny you should say that, because recently I've felt somewhat of a desire to become a writer, a dream I had for a long time as a kid, but it kinda just faded for whatever reason; your words encourage me!

      Dec 17, 2012
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      sayonaranow

      I'm glad! I am on the process of writing a book too! I have found some books in the library i work at; that some authors were badly judged for a lack of 'clean' writing. For not being too hard on themselves to make a better book, but their works are praised for being what they are and inspiring the human ming to explore the corners of imagination. You have a great capacity, so be sure that you can be a great author too.

      Dec 17, 2012
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      DIYman

      You're writing a book! That's awesome; can i ask what kind of book it is?:)

      Dec 17, 2012
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      sayonaranow

      Well, i am actually writing three of them. One is a bout a teenage girl who, sadly, is raped ; but she can't remember who did it and she's going through the emotional process of recovery while on vacations with her family to the house of her grandparents and she meets with a gothic boy(Tommy Sanders) who will help her in twisted and rebellion-like stages of grieve. Also she is doubting the people she trusts because her world has been shattered and she wants to find out who hurt her. It's a story about betrayal and new.found hope. Kinda dark. The other one is entitled Where's my angel?' and it's a strange love story, involving three tortured souls in Hell. Is redemption still in the reached of the damned? What happens when love is not what you expected? And, how did i make so many mistakes that now i'm in my oun personal Hell followed by the anti-christ himself?
      The third one is more like a horror story full of satire. I wrot a short story called 'Talk To The Knife' that i posted her on EP, if you'd like to check it later. I tried to concentrate on a decieving delusion of happiness and love, as well as on shattered hope. Spiced up with a little insanity and mental trickery.

      Dec 17, 2012
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      DIYman

      wow those all actually sound very interesting, and unique. I'll definately check out the story you posted!

      Dec 17, 2012
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      sayonaranow

      Thanks! And plese, do not hesitate to comunicate your thoughts on it. Criticism is what i am looking for.

      Dec 17, 2012
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    AllStarcrushNate

    Wow. Resounding. Amazing.

    Dec 13, 2012
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      DIYman

      yeah well it kinda rings true ya know? *winks knowingly*

      Dec 13, 2012
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      AllStarcrushNate

      Yep ;-)

      Dec 13, 2012
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