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I Love You :)

The Weather

By: deleted

Written on May 28th, 2009

If I was the sun

I would enter through your window

touching each part of your body

waking up your dreams.

If I was the rain

I would wet your mouth

discovering the passion

drowning my temptations

If I was the moon

I would illuminate your eyes

caressing your face

with shining kisses

If I was the blizzard

I would touch your heart

killing your hunger

and durst of passion

If I was the wind

I would whisper your name

every morning

saying I love you! :)

By: deleted

Age: 26-30

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10 responses

Charlie1960

You've done it again. Your poetry is so beautiful. You are an absolute dream.

If I were the sea

I would caress you in my waves.

Nov 13, 2010
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lovesteen3

That was really heart felt who ever you send or sent that to they must really love you! :)

May 28, 2009
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partytested

this is absolutely beautiful!! I love it

some man is the luckiest man in the world.

May 28, 2009
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frito414

I LOVE this poem. I have to keep rereading it for it's simple/deep beauty

May 28, 2009
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mewold

No, thank YOU. You're sweet.

May 28, 2009
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mewold

This is a greaat poem. When I try to write one, It turns into a naughty limmeric.

May 28, 2009
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Myonis108

This is my new favorite. For the moment! There are so many.

May 28, 2009
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PTMAN

very beautiful princess, like always. :)

May 28, 2009
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georgeg

well you write better groggy than I ever could on my clearest day :-*

May 28, 2009
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georgeg

oh another great one!

I f I was the sun

I would enter through your window

touching each part of your body

waking up your dreams.

that is so beautiful

May 28, 2009
3 likes