Ungrammatical Love Song

Hi all,

Here is a poem that fits this experience group perfectly. I hope you like it. Let me know your thoughts, opinions.

Purposely Ungrammatical Love Song
      There's many and many, and not so far,
Is willing to dry my tears away;
There's many to tell me what you are,
And never a lie to all they say.

It's little the good to hide my head,
It's never the use to bar my door;
There's many as counts the tears I shed,
There's mourning hearts for my heart is

There's honester eyes than your blue eyes,
There's better a mile than such as you.
But when did I say that I was wise,
And when did I hope that you were true?

Dorothy Parker

rosesencha rosesencha
2 Responses Aug 17, 2007

I couldn't have said it better myself lookingforanewgig. I hope you get the rest you deserve and need. =)

Uh its very nice of you to share this and all but i must say i don't understand much from reading it. Im not very good at analyzing already and the strange grammar just makes it even harder. The first part is about how the person you love is nice and pretty and everyone says so. Second part is about how you can't escape your heart's desire for that person by locking yourself up in your house. Third part is about getting over it and going out and finding that special someone. Maybe? Thats what i get from reading it anyway. Hey i just realized that i feel better now. There's someone out there for me, i just know it. :D Okay i think I've babbled on long enough. Thanks for your poem :)