I'm writing a new erotica and I need some opinions on my introduction. Comments from guys and girls are welcomed :)

I throw you to the bed, your breasts bouncing up. I fall onto you, ripping you shirt off, ready to **** you hard. Leaning down, I begin to suck your hard nipples. Waves of pleasure is sent throughout your body. You try to moan out with pleasure, but using my other hand, I cover your mouth. No one's going to hear your moans of pleasure except for me.
dragon8877 dragon8877
18-21
Aug 16, 2014