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I Play With Words

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By: girlmcgirly
Written on February 5th, 2012
**** me like a rock song
love me like the blues.

Hard and fast, find the depth
it is yours, when you get

your hands in position
to ***** slap the situation.

Angry eyes and lying tongues
drown me with love and hate.

Sleep through my epiphany
they are coming in multiples

with or without you
I have got this.

All the pretty words faded
but the dirty ones get the job done.

Do you hear that?
You feel me now?

It sounds like love
It feels just like...go to hell.
By: girlmcgirly
Age: 41-45 , Female
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    girlmcgirly
    girlmcgirly

    Thanks so much, Shadowyblue!

    Mar 9, 2012
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    shadowyblue
    shadowyblue

    very heart felt said with passion

    Mar 9, 2012
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    CurvatureoftheMind
    CurvatureoftheMind

    Would have loved to have played with you like you play with words, GMcG...have missed you but I am well and hoping that's the same for you.

    Mar 9, 2012
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      girlmcgirly
      girlmcgirly

      Thanks so much, CotM, all is very well and I will always find a way to play with words. I wish I could do what you can with a lens!

      Mar 9, 2012
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    girlmcgirly
    girlmcgirly

    Thanks Shadow, I will do that.

    Feb 12, 2012
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    shadowyblue
    shadowyblue

    excellent,i like the way you express yourself -i have videos on youtube mentalmike -please have a look mike

    Feb 12, 2012
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    girlmcgirly
    girlmcgirly

    Wow, Ronan....that is high praise coming from you....thank you for every word of it!

    Feb 6, 2012
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    ronanp
    ronanp

    I think I will add another WOW to the list girly. I think you know that poetry is not always my thing but nothing moves me like raw emotion presented in any form. Sleep through my epiphany ; Great line that says so much .... I loved it.

    Feb 6, 2012
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    girlmcgirly
    girlmcgirly

    Sometimes, it is the only way to go.



    Sometimes.

    Feb 6, 2012
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    Scoobs57
    Scoobs57

    Cool. I love that mean dirty all the way to the bone feeling sometimes.

    Feb 6, 2012
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    girlmcgirly
    girlmcgirly

    COMP!!!! Hey! Sorry....i got overwhelmed by happiness at seeing ya!



    Thank you...I didn't stick in this in a poetry or "writing" group because I know it isn't all fleshed out and perfect....but I was playing with words and had a helluva time, so I put them here.



    *hugs*

    Feb 6, 2012
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    accomplice
    accomplice

    I'm impressed....strong words, strong symbolism, strong imagery, and you masterfully shift the image to an alternate, powerful one. Opposed, yet connected. Bravo.

    Feb 6, 2012
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    girlmcgirly
    girlmcgirly

    Thanks to each and every one of you for finding your way here to my playground and taking the time to comment on the words!

    Feb 6, 2012
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    geetar39
    geetar39

    Wow!

    I think 'hlpie' is right. This is alive and kickin'

    Feb 6, 2012
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      girlmcgirly
      girlmcgirly

      Thanks, Tar. I appreciate that.

      Feb 6, 2012
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    hlpflwthat
    hlpflwthat

    PG or not ... we find inspiration in unusual places don' we.



    Dirty or not, it is still inspiration ... an the result is often better than we might imagine.



    Like this piece ... one of your better in some time ... IMHO. Tap that sh*t girl.

    Feb 6, 2012
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      girlmcgirly
      girlmcgirly

      Thanks so much, Hlpfl...that means a lot to me, truly.

      Feb 6, 2012
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    samedeepwater
    samedeepwater

    I'll have to think about this one.

    Feb 6, 2012
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      girlmcgirly
      girlmcgirly

      Hey, I guess that could be a compliment too...either way it's in your mind....heh

      Feb 6, 2012
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      samedeepwater
      samedeepwater

      It is a compliment. This caught me like a slap in the face. It was feather, and it was iron. It made me like it, even when I didn't want to.

      Feb 7, 2012
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    toistory
    toistory

    You may feel pain the way I feel love ..

    Feb 5, 2012
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      girlmcgirly
      girlmcgirly

      I guess feeling is the important part.

      Feb 6, 2012
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      toistory
      toistory

      Yeah I guess. Now where's my medication?!?!

      Feb 6, 2012
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