Register

I Remember My First Kiss

Victor Was His Name

By: Fresalatina
Written on August 2nd, 2012
Age: 26-30 , Female
225 people have read this story

Your Response

By clicking "Post", you confirm that you agree to the Terms of Service of Experience Project, Inc.
5 responses
  • 0
    NEW!
    Spotlight outstanding comments to help more people see them, and to show your appreciation to the author.
    ShyButCreativeSexyGuy

    That is SUCH a beautiful story



    I just stopped to ask myself if it's cuz U R such a beautiful woman, but I honestly didn't think of you as U R now while reading: your words inspired a vision of you & he at @ the same age that I first fell in love



    Barb was always top of the class & I was always 2nd



    The game remonds me of a game of rounders our crowd played in the quiet street outside Woodchurch C of E Primary School



    Barb swung the bat with all her wiry strength & the ball hit me in the throat, making me cough & choke



    Barb thought she'd killed me & ran home - just a few yards - crying



    Even right at the time, we all found it hilarious



    Barb was a sweet girl, but any time she got mad, she'd go right for da throat



    There was one side-splitting day when 'The **** Of The School' - a bully - came crying down the school steps, clutching his throat & blubbering, "She strangled me!"



    No-one needed ask who



    Da funniest bit of da Barb story was that, just as I was madly in love with her, she was madly in love with Patrick



    My crazy Irish mind decided to prove to Barb that I loved her more than he did



    So she & I made up a game



    I'd say, 'Bet ya can't strangle me with my top button fastemed .. with my collar turned up .. with one hand .. ya left hand .. upside down' - (when I was lain down sunbathing & she'd knelt by my head to block my rays)



    Guess ya can call her a truly breathtaking beauty, eh?



    LOL



    She had to move miles away when we were both 11 & I never saw her till 10 yrs later, I got invited to her wedding, where her older cousin took a shine to me & got off with me by dancing in a way no-one has ever danced since: she was half Navajo



    Carol was the 2nd best gf I ever had & sure taught me a lot: she was 27 & a single mum of 2: I was 21

    Aug 8, 2012
    1 like
  • 0
    NEW!
    Spotlight outstanding comments to help more people see them, and to show your appreciation to the author.
    smileisathousandwords

    i like your story. the way you wrote it. the story itself and how you expressed it. it was cute but had meaning

    Aug 3, 2012
    1 like
    • 0
      NEW!
      Spotlight outstanding comments to help more people see them, and to show your appreciation to the author.
      Fresalatina

      Thank you .. I was an evil child :(

      Aug 3, 2012
      1 like
    • 0
      NEW!
      Spotlight outstanding comments to help more people see them, and to show your appreciation to the author.
      smileisathousandwords

      Every child is innocent. That's what made the story cute!
      Who was evil was the father!

      Aug 3, 2012
      1 like
    • 0
      NEW!
      Spotlight outstanding comments to help more people see them, and to show your appreciation to the author.
      Fresalatina

      Hey thank you that is true I always felt guilty but I actually had never thought that it was not my fault his dad was abusive, but still I never should have lied :(

      Aug 3, 2012
      1 like