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I Remember When

Memories Of Yesterday And Today

By: journalwriter
Written on April 6th, 2010
Age: 51-55 , Female
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  • Missalaineyeus

    Cute story. I just smile when I see that a writer enjoys the life events that compel the story to take word form. ~~smile~~



    Writer suggestion: wouldn't the flying doughs balls have a more visual impact if catapulted from a spoon (something you have in your hand) rather than "fired" from a cannon? that is what I saw anyways; no matter what was "in word", my imagination took over...just a thought.

    Apr 10, 2012
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  • journalwriter

    Thank you for your very nice comment. Yes, someday I will write about the cannon balls. (smile) Have a wonderful day.

    Jul 19, 2010
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  • ForestSong

    You write wonderfully Journalwriter :) I was brought back into those memories with you. Justice sounds like a very cool fellow!



    I too would love to read about the cannonballs made of dough with a spoon to fire them one day.

    Jul 18, 2010
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  • SugarBritches007

    I love your story. It's so imaginative. Great job.

    And yes, I would love to read about the little white cannonballs and the cannon.

    Maybe

    Someday

    Hopefully

    Soon.



    Blessings to you

    Apr 12, 2010
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