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The Little Store.

By: Freestanding
Written on November 4th, 2009
Age: 51-55 , Female
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    mudd1962

    WOW takes me back to Johnny's market, on saturday when we got paid for doing our chore's we would walk down there and get what we wanted. we also would go trough the hood and pick up returnable bottles and trade them back in. Thank you Nancy for taking me back to a btter time. THANK YOU

    May 20, 2012
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    madwag

    love this story!

    Jul 17, 2011
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    zzltfrg

    Places like this are (or maybe were) utterly captivating to children, as well as many adults. You have really recreated the atmosphere of the place, which is beautifully described, with some excellent observation of detail.

    Jan 1, 2010
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    Freestanding

    Ladee, it is a huge sign as I recall but yes, I would love to have it. I'll see what I can do. :) Thanks!



    kctiger--I've heard that before too, sliced bread tasting like cake. Can you imagine?



    Dawnriser--Thanks you for your comment.



    LordVoldemort--Thanks for reading.

    Nov 9, 2009
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    LordVoldemort

    Great post, thank you for sharing such a memory

    Nov 7, 2009
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    Dawnriser

    What a wonderfully described memory, N.D.! Great writing. Sure brought back some memories for me as it kind of combined a couple places in my past.

    The little store two doors up from our house was just another house, the downstairs of which had been made into a little neighborhood grocery. I could send my four year old to get what I needed and they'd just keep a tab for me. And the part about the door? Oh yes, it had one just like that!

    Thank you for writing this. It made my day.

    Nov 5, 2009
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    kctiger

    I liked your story that was great, It makes me think about the corner store when I was growing up, but It was a little different, it was in the city. My folks grew up in the country so I can understand a little what the store meant to you.

    My dad was born in 1923 he remembers when sliced bread was new, he thought it was like cake. And my Mom remembers when Margarine was new, they would give you a stick of light colored yard and a color packet and you mixed it together yourself and my mom and her sister would fight over who would get to do it.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    Freestanding

    Thank you Darlene. It is too bad about the Mom and Pops. I do stop anytime I see one though.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    darlene

    What a great story. Your attention to detail made me "see" it in my mind. Fabulous use of language. Too bad mom & pop places got displaced by chain stores.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    Freestanding

    Thank you SW. :)

    Nov 4, 2009
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    Freestanding

    Your welcome and thank you frito and Tas. It's nice to remember such a fond place.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    Orangetas

    Enjoyed your story very much and especially the ending .. thank you for sharing it.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    Orangetas

    Enjoyed your story very much and especially the ending .. thank you for sharing it.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    frito414

    I love this story. Maybe it wasn't physically beautiful but your description makes it seem beautiful to me....sort of like a souped up warm and fuzzy gesture. Thanks Nancy. :D

    Nov 4, 2009
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    Freestanding

    Thank you Juan. Thank you Sahira. As I wrote this I was thinking shame on me for not having a picture. The next time I head up to my folks I will be sure to take a few pics of Momms.

    Nov 4, 2009
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    juan1966

    What a picturesque slice of Americana!

    Isn't it amazing that there was once a time when a post office, a gas station and a small store could all be blended into one structure with a front porch complete with a checker board encouraging patrons to loiter.



    Thanks for yanking the thread, Nancy Drew. It is a pleasure to follow you down a lane of your memory.

    Nov 4, 2009
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