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Nowhere

Run if you wish
Pray your legs will save you
Cry if you wish
Pray your tears will clean your wounds
Jump into the ocean if you wish
Pray your soul will flee with the water
But in all your passion for nonexistence
I'm praying you would stay
Us, nobodies
Here, nowhere to go
In my hands, your soul I keep
Mine, I give to you now
to you I give Half of my soul
Would you go nowhere, with this nobody, doing nothing?...
frankenstaine frankenstaine 26-30, M 5 Responses Sep 30, 2011

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One reads this , such as I a woman who can't help but wonder what this young man has to be in such torture about, I of course wonder if he is nice looking , that got me far in my youth, so your not lonely by accident , you have designed your life to be as lonely as you are , you want to keep your distance , you seem to fragile to cry in front of this one lady, you hold even your tounge around her, is she your sister , have you a sister, is she passed, I feel I am reading someone , is it you ? Pardon me and my issue of a prompting spirit but it asked if you want forgiveness of something or to know you have her forgiveness , Is she this woman in life or one that is deseased, it may be both. I get a message that you were forgiven. She forgives you, what ever that means to you or NOT.

i didnt write this for anyone in particular, but you guess right, i did lost my grandmother in April but that was months after I wrote this....I wrote this merely because I was feeling lonely, most of the writings or poem that I wrote here are all dedicated to myself and inspired by me... story of my life, i dont really have nobody to be written about or to write for... :l

You are so interesting to read, an interesting young man.

I liked this one. Weird it is, but still...a quality that I like about it. Thank you.

That's really good......really really good.

what can i say... haha.. jk, thanks

this is really good, you are really good! and everything you wrote is so very very true