I Feel It Too.

I see the tears that you hide from everyone else.  I feel the pain that you pretend that is not there.  I see the fear in your eye that says  you just want to give up.  No one would think anything less of you if they just knew the hell you were going through.  But I can also see the strength that is deep inside you as I hold you close.  You feel like it has alluded you but its still there just waiting for you to tap in to it.  I give you a kiss and tell you that I love you.  Your eyes show a glimpse of fire.  The fire that use to rage some time a go.  I know that you can feel it too.  A little smile do your lips show as your thoughts race to and through.  Just then do you realize that you will make it, that nothing, nor no one will stop you.

LateNightGuy LateNightGuy
41-45, M
3 Responses Mar 2, 2010

Oh that's really good writing!!.. I like it!;) nicely done

Both mental and physical pain. This was not for just one person. I have a very good friend that has gone through a lot of mental pain. And this story was a way to cheer her up. She knows that she is very special to me and I to her as well.<br />
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Next would be my son who contracted a syndrome from a flu shot last year that left him paralyzed from the knees down. He was in the hospital for 2 weeks follow up by 6 month of therapy. He had to learn to walked with out any feeling in his legs or feet. He is back to 98% of what he was.

i wish i could have done something to help my guy when i was in your shoes. are you able to get good medical care? is the pain from an injury or is it pain from a disease is he suffering mental pain? i don't know if i could be any help to you but i lost my husband last spring and he suffered with chronic pain for ten years.