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Feelings

The biggest fear I had was losing you.
The funny thing is, in the end that's what it came down to.
Two people new to this love thing, not knowing what to do.

Extremely different but a lot alike.
No one said it would be easy, but to me you were worth the fight.
I was in it all the way, you barely at all.
Guess that's what happens when you're the only one that falls.

I tried to stay patient, prayed every night for the best.
But everyday just seemed like a new harder test.
Things didn't change, they just got worse.
But loving someone who can't love you back, now that is the worst.

If you read please leave comments. This is my first poem and I would like to know what everyone thinks of it. Thanks
Unknownwriter123 Unknownwriter123 18-21 2 Responses Jan 19, 2013

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Very nice. I agree. :)

Thank you :)

Dear i dont know who you are we have lots of similarity..
But remember dear a true champion never deny to accept his loss but he accept it with the grace and dignity so that he can come back with more power and strength.

Can you explain a little further what you mean please