A Poem...i Am Writing

This is a poem I started writing! It isn't finished yet! It will definitely be longer and more shall be added but I would like to share it with you! I hope you guys like it! Let me know what you think!

There once was a night where a woman sat at the bar,
She glanced over not too far,
And, noticed a man in an Army t-shirt,
She couldn’t help but want to flirt,
She told her girlfriend how attractive she found him,
And, how she now had this sudden whim,
To buy him a drink and thank him for his service,
When she called the waitress over she was a little bit nervous,
After confirming her initial prediction,
She wasn’t aware it was the beginning of her addiction,
Nobody thought introducing themselves would only be the start,
But, as fate would have it they had each others heart,
No one may have known yet but as time would surely tell,
His deployment was going to have some hell,
Neither one expected to grow so fond of one another,
That not talking everyday was going to be a bother,
How could she possibly prepare for such an event,
As meeting the soldier only angels could’ve sent,
Someone so handsome and together,
Who made her feel like the wind blowing a feather,



more to come eventually!
Deepartridge89 Deepartridge89
22-25
1 Response Oct 4, 2012

This is really good i cant wait to read the rest!!

Thanks so much!