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Aimless

By: ketkat
Written on January 31st, 2010
By: ketkat
Age: 18-21
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    EvTom

    ok sorry to bore you, but you've inspired me to write one more thing...

    I gazed up at the sky. I was just a tiny boat on a vast ocean. No wind, no waves, just me floating there. Adrift on the open sea. Lord Jim, the ship wreck scene. The sky was deep & brilliant, a fixed idea beyond human doubt. From my position on the ground the sky seemed the logical culmination of all existence. The same with the sea. If you look at the sea for days, the sea is all there is. Quoth Joseph Conrad. A tiny boat cut loose from the fiction of the ship. Aimless, inescapable, inevitable. - Haruki Murakami

    Dec 5, 2011
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    EvTom

    very interesting girl! there is so much space between the words, between the sub atomic particles, between ourselves and our perception of ourselves - haha space -yep there is a lot of it - definitely no shortage. It can make you feel lonely planet rocket ship photography. You are someone with something to say. Unfortunately there are very few situations in life when a truly original thought is called for -

    Dec 5, 2011
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    ketkat

    Thank you BellaFairy i appreciate it :)

    Apr 27, 2010
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    BellaFairy

    Beautiful poem :D

    Apr 18, 2010
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