Your Eyes, My Jeans...

Most would describe your eyes with words of lakes, or the sea, or the sky.. To me your eyes are like my favorite old pair of jeans.Both are a lovely light blue that time has made softer..Your eyes like my jeans feel very good on my skin..Both whisper that there are lovely secrets that lay just inside.And lastly they both hide desires,deep longings, that once opened can lead o wonderful things......
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5 Responses Jan 9, 2013

The worst pick up line I've ever heard but sweet all the same :)

You have a gift for words. Love your stuff! Thanks for sharing, all of it!

I like that, thanks for sharing it. You do write wonderfully, by the way!

This short text is full of fantasy. I do like mystery in someone. Blue mysteries sound so well...

I'd like to say "My Jeans, You Eyes...", but then you haven't seen my jeans... However, the part that says "there are lovely secrets that lay just inside... they hide desires,deep longings, that once opened can lead o wonderful things..." does apply...