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Rip My Clothes Off...

I am here. I feel your gaze. It burns my body. It is hot like the sun on me on an August afternoon..I am so hot for you, it is unbearable. I know you want me. I want you too. Let's not wait. Come close. Your lips devour me. I am on fire. You are too. I feel you harden against me. It's not enough...It will never be. I am small in your arms. Yield to our passion. Rip my clothes off...You know you want to...I want you to...Your buttons spray the air...The sound of tearing clothes is loud and welcome. My blouse hangs in shreds. You cannot be fast enough. I yank down your jeans and your underwear. We are focused on our task. You thrust me against the wall. I am wet and willing . You are hard and wanting. You bang me until I come...Again and again and again. I yell your name. I beg you not to stop. We sink to the floor, satisfied for the moment.We are dripping in sweat. I smile. You do too. Shall we go again? I can't stop wanting you.
PoetryNEmotion PoetryNEmotion 51-55, F 75 Responses Mar 2, 2012

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I don't care how good the sex is, I buy expensive clothes, so any ripped or stretched garments will be replaced.

David Banner!!!!!!! Right??

I am not acquainted with the Hulk! LOL....:)

That is amazing thankyou for bringing me to a great feeling!

You are welcome, Steven! :)

Wonderful piece of prose, exactly what I wanted more of years ago in the erotic journals Paramour, Yellow Silk, & Libido. I miss those publications, but I am glad I have found yours... ;)

Thank you for your comments. :)

yes

Yes? *laughing softly* That is all you have to say? :)

more, much more but only to you

That's the best way to work up a sweat!!!!!

LOL. It is better than soccer! LOL. :)

I read the responses below too and I agree that you've captured the spirit of your passion very well indeed. You could easily expand this to a short story if you wanted. Well done and thank you for sharing this.

Thank you. It must live the way it is...I have written other erotica. If you examine the responses below, they will lead you to them. I thank you for your comments. :)

You're welcome. Don't think the thought hasn't crossed my mind, but I was getting pretty sleepy. Will so peruse. :)

Thank you. *giggles* Enjoy. And do comment. It inspires me to write more....:)

Will do both. ;)

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Oh my...I so need this kind of experience!!

As do I.....Not bad for fiction, yes, memphis? LOL. Soon....:)

This vignette was pure fantasy...? Hm... Definitely a hot fantasy, & I sincerely hope you'll find your way soon to the kind of satiation that would follow shredded clothing -- even if no clothing was harmed. ;)

Not at all it sounds so very wonderful!!

*giggles* I have lots of passion! :)

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Ohhhh yesssssss. Again and again! I want you

Just seeing this now....Thank you, but I don't KNOW you! LOL. :)

You could get to know me.........lol

well then let hughgo be the one to do the ripping tearing and the loving .

Thank you, but I have a love here on EP. Please follow the comments below to find the names of my other erotica. Glad you liked it. :)

wow, i love the story. very sexy and hot =]

Thank you. There are a few others. Follow the comments below to learn the titles. :)

ur welcome and okay =]

I want to rip my own clothes off after reading this!!! lol!! Hawt! Hawt! Hawt!! I know its an old story but still very Hawt!!

Thank you, Mahal! lol..Then DO read my featured story. Another old one, but brought back by popular demand. *winks* May I watch? :)

May I have the honor of participating? lol

In watching her rip off her clothing? You must ask her.

Assisting her in undressing. lol

As you wish...Bye.

Will do :)

Ok thats not showing up in the right sequence..... Will do is referring to your suggestion for me to read your other story :)

I removed it. It is in the I Like Intimate Moments forum. Called I Want You. I Need You. I Desire You. Thank you, Mahal.

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Breathtaking!

I just posted a more raw erotica. I write them rarely. It is old too, but my desire, my lust is new! LOL! Sit down before you read it! Thank you for your words, CWS! :)

WOW WOW....Wonderful. You seem to be a very passionate woman. You spray a fire with your words, which I could see and feel through the screen of my PC. Your partner is a blessed man. If you're together the air must crackle with passion, love and lust. Thank you for this wonderful and exciting post. I guess I should look after my partner now ;)))

Your words are fire! LOL. This was my first attempt at erotica. See the date? I have love on EP. But we shall meet this autumn. The air here is brimming with heartsong! My heart thanks you! Do enjoy! kissesssssssssssssss..Perhaps you would honor me with some erotica. I am curious on your love. My ex is gay.

This makes me...want.
More please.

Time. This is my earliest erotic piece! I have just a few more. Do you wish me to direct you? :)

Do it.

omg, so hot

this was written long ago. my first attempt at eroticism... everyone loves this! thank you! :)

PoetryNEmotion,

WOW I am ready for more!!!

BAre Hugs
Nudy

hi, friend! long time no see! this was old. I have written better. this is raw, untouched....thank you! :)

sorry I have been very busy. Yes I know it is an old story, but wonderful when it is raw and untouched.

bAre Hugs
Nudy

Wow I need a shower.

Thank you! See my reply to risenphoenix. It lists another erotica you would like. This was my first attempt. :)

I know I commented previously, but just came upon the story again in my feed. I've always thought that this can be very erotic and sexy - passions heating up so quickly that there's no time to undress, no time to worry about damaging clothes, only time to rip them off to get at the delicious prize they hold! Have done this on occasion, and had no complaints just because her dress and panties were completely ruined in the process! :)

Very good. You are a woman of true emotion.

Thank you for your words. I am...If you like erotica, I have written several. Under the forum I Like The Intimate Moment-I Want You. I Need You. I Desire You. It is rather explicit. And if you appreciate a different taste, then go to the I Like 2011A forum. And read Tigress. It is a poem-story. It was well-received. I appreciate comments too. Have a day that sings, risenphoenix! :)

I will do that and thanks for the lead. I enjoy reading and writing erotica, myself. You too, have a wonderful day and keep writing. :)

When I have my mate in person, I know my erotica will be truly inspired. Thank you. :)

I can agree with that. I have no mate at the present time, only a long distance friend with whom we share many erotic thoughts and dreams with each other.

Then we share this as well. *smiling largely* I meet him in a time agreed upon. I am happy. And loved. :)

That's very good. My friend, a lovely lady, and I both know that through time and space, we have always been lovers, even in other lives and there will come a time, very soon, when we are physical lovers, again.

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That sounds suggestive...

Laughing my sweet as s off! LOL. It is erotica! It is supposed to be suggestive! :)

I couldnt have written a better story myself. Wow. =)

zonus this is over a year old. lol. my first attempt. Try the I Like the Intimate Moments forum. I wrote the one I Want You. I Need You. I Desire You. And if you want more erotica there is my Tigress poem-story in the I Like 2011A forum. Desire more? Ask me when you are done them. Feel free to comment....:)

omg was this ever hot...I miss that passion, that lust, that "I don't care who hears" that "I need you/it now" thanks for sharing

Thank you, long2watch. This was my first one. Passion is lovely indeed...:)

Buttons spray in the air....As I rip your Blouse off??

OK

My house ..? .Your House....? Doghouse...?

Blow the Whistle, Referee I'm ready

I am just seeing this today! LOL. You are an eager man, Crowd. Make me laugh! Thanks! :)

You started it...I had to comment.
A woman who says such things are like....Wow, I wonder what she's like??

*winks* Use your imagination! LOL. And dream a bit! Mmmmmmm....:)

Just saying this is hot doesn't seem to be enough. . . But it's simple and to the point. .
Those moments when primal lust takes over. .

This was my first attempt. I am not satisfied with it. But first attempts are the start to something better. Read my newer erotica. It is much better. I don't understand why so many like this one. Perhaps it is the rawness and naturalness they feel when they read it. I am unsure. Thank you. When I have a man in my bed and in my life, I will be much better. :)

Smiles. . . Don't be too critical . . . It stands out with its directness and rawness. . totally captures a moment of pure need. .
And I will indeed read some more.

Thank you from my heart. With experience comes improvement. Otherwise I just use my imagination. And then I find the moment of or gasm is always weak in my stories. Where is my love? *looks around but he is working...LOL. :) *

Pull them Sheets back WOMEN...and get in bed.!!
Ok, who left the dam light on??

of course won't happen but just from your writing I'd love to volunteer

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Ahhhhss... i wunts moars... lets play that in slo mo pls. I say we make a video and im the camera guy, for now.

I make no po rn with you! This is old. I have come a long way since then. You should read my newer ones. LOL. What exactly do you want?

ermm NOthing,, just a smile on that face... relax cupcake its all in gewd fun, you kno wut i mean JeLLy Bean ...

Gezz shes aggressive = }~

Do I? Hahaha! Now I am truly laughing! I have never been called cupcake! Nor jelly bean. You are funny. And strange. I am assertive. So there!

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Small but nicely written

It was my very first....Funny how so many love it! Is it the innocence of the beauty?

Sounds great to me,Another round of pleasure

*laughing* I read on your Casper and you read on my first erotica. Ironic. Do read Cowboy Climax. And I Want You I Need You I Desire You. Those are much better. And do feel free to comment. I like critique. Thank you. Pleasure is desirable in my life.

I do like your story, feeling and or your dream. I could only dream to be there.
thank you for sharing your story.

Thank you. Santa? Good grief! Santa fantasizes about someone other than Mrs. Clause? I have been likened to a naughty, blonde elf! LOL!

You are probably NOT naughty, just a bit mischievous. But when i find the book it will tell me, if I can find it. The work shop is real cluttered right now.

No, I am in the naughty book. Sometimes just mischievous. Depends....

Why do you think you are naughty? your still talking to me, so you can't be that naughty.

I am polite. Why do you say that? Unclear you are...

Unclear about what? i am always unclear about most every thing.

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Bravo, nicely done. I'm sure after that it would be a pleasure to "go again".

Alas, this is fiction, hon. I hope to do this in real life soon! Please read Cowboy Climax and I Want You I Need You I Desire You. Those are much better. Thank you. :)

Will do. I hope you will check mine as well? My featured story and "His Perfect Match", you might enjoy both?