Rip My Clothes Off...

I am here. I feel your gaze. It burns my body. It is hot like the sun on me on an August afternoon..I am so hot for you, it is unbearable. I know you want me. I want you too. Let's not wait. Come close. Your lips devour me. I am on fire. You are too. I feel you harden against me. It's not enough...It will never be. I am small in your arms. Yield to our passion. Rip my clothes off...You know you want to...I want you to...Your buttons spray the air...The sound of tearing clothes is loud and welcome. My blouse hangs in shreds. You cannot be fast enough. I yank down your jeans and your underwear. We are focused on our task. You thrust me against the wall. I am wet and willing . You are hard and wanting. You bang me until I come...Again and again and again. I yell your name. I beg you not to stop. We sink to the floor, satisfied for the moment.We are dripping in sweat. I smile. You do too. Shall we go again? I can't stop wanting you.
PoetryNEmotion PoetryNEmotion 51-55, F 85 Responses Mar 2, 2012

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Good read.

Thank you. This is one of the first things I wrote here nearly 3 yrs ago, Chess.

a long time ago i decided that i much prefer to live as a female. some people have even gone so far as to say
i am pretty.

No. You are beautiful. I know...:)

I have a story to write. (c)
Because i am different from you.
I'll try and get it just right
so you will understand it too.
I was born intersexed you see.
both a bit of he and of she..
to say its confusing is a bit of a strech.
but to be really honest it is.
just wondering which bathroom
you can use is a task
do you go into hers or in his.
And when you are ready to date
which friend do you ask to the prom?
are you more like a guy or is it girlie
that you are and and does the date
end up as a bomb.
these are questions i have had all my life.
do i want to be husband or a wife?
can i give the love a spouse deserves
or should i just stay alone and
avoid all the Marital strife.?

There is nothing wrong with you. So just be whoever you want to be. Hermaphrodites are unique. So you should be happy in the knowledge that you are incredible. Okay? :)

That sounds so familier .
it is the age old throbbing
of love and lust making us
dance to the rythem of
the instructions in our Genes.
to replenish and replace
the copies of our selves.
so that life may continue
after the husks that are us
have gone back to the dust.

And it's so much damn fun ;)))))))

Get naked - quick...

Never had this experience yet! But hoping...:)

Very poetic! Thank you! :)

I guess that's how most of us would like it - a burst of unbridled animal passion and to hell with the consequences.

Wonder if it ever actually happens outside our fevered imaginations?

I am a realistic romantic. And I intend to have this fantasy come true. Believe me I am working on it. *smiles secretly* It will happen. Count on it. Then, when I write on it, it will be with experience. And in that forum I created long ago. I am curious on if you will make yours materialize.

My fantasy is most unlikely to materialise - just coming up to my 40th anniversary, but my wifechas both physical and psychological issues that means a rabid animalistic burst of unbridled passion is most unlikely to occur.

I left a sexless marriage of 3 decades a year ago this March that just passed. So I am well acquainted with what you are saying. And so, I wish you well. She could be helped. Whose choice is it, ultimately? And what are you content to live with? All your own answers...

My choice to stay - I remember vowing "in sickness and in health" and I intend to keep it. It's not like a lot of the marriages in here - her issues are deep seated and despite treatment she's just a shell of the stunning girl I married.
I do relieve my frustrations but it's difficult sometimes.

Still it's what it is.

Many do remain. They have reasons. Valid ones, I am sure. People change. My ex was a monster. And he is gay. Not that gay men are monsters. But he could not say who he was. And he has mental issues. Shells seem to be what people remain with. Pity. But I commend you. And I know you will suffer. How do you relieve? Self-pleasuring? Many cheat. As I said, it is your life. And your choice. Thank you.

How? ****, some playmates in EP aand prostitution is legal over here.

Not going near an affair - way too many complications.

I get by.

I'm glad you seem to have prospects - just go easy on him at first....unless you both are into acting like horny teenagers :)

So you do cope. But in the end, are you happy? Fulfilled? Satisfied? Course I have prospects. I am desirable. And I seem to be the kind of "dream" girl men desire. But I am selective and I have high standards. I never was the typical teen. I did not date until 19. If I had been, I would not have got involved with my ex. Course everyone was young and naive at 19. I was.

Reasonably happy - it does get frustrating but there's no way I'd leave her - she needs me.

I do like how you describe yourself - "dream" girl are you? Some guy is going to hit the jackpot with you.

Got to sign off as I'm nearly home but I'd love to chat more - would you add me?

Zen hug - you sound delicious.

Needing is not always desirable. What about what you need? Think on that. Sacrificing one's own desires for another is not always what is best. You are not a selfish man. A fine yet severe quality. Many have called me a dream girl. And yes, many agree on this jackpot. And I laugh merrily. I will. I think I could teach you a bit on life. And you bring a quiet song to me. I am certainly irresistible. *beams* But then, so are you. And I am delighted on an intelligent discussion on a piece of poetry that I never knew would cause so much lust!

where do you think all the single mothers come from?! ! !

From failed unions. From intercourse with no regard for protection. From one-night stands. From men who cannot handle a commitment. From many things.

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Nice. You are passion oriented woman.

Thank you.

Nicely done. I believe you should "go again"!

This is fiction...Some day, DM..:)

i have been married 4 times . three of my Partners died.Two with
heart attacks and one with last partner and i were ,arried 37 years . I wondered if i would ever find anyone that would love me ever again. I was 65 and had been out of circulation for fourty years.
I dated a few times but never found anyone that there was that spark
or chemistry with. one night i was in a chat room and saw this guy that was chatting with a girl. He mentioned that he lived inthe same town that i did. So later I started Chatting with him and we found that we both knew some of the same people so we became friends.Later I met his mother and we also became friends.

And now?

And now we have been married for 9 years.

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This is pretty deep I must say............

This was one of the first things I wrote on EP. I am still surprised it is so popular. I think it is the rawness and naturalness of it. Do read more. I appreciate your comments, zonus. Thank you.

I would still hold you and love you
No matter how you dressed.
no matter who your friends are
i would always be impressed.
By who you were and how you stand.
and if you love a woman
thats ok because it shows
that you are only human.
we love who we love
it is how we feel.
Just be sure that the love is real.
Love is such a glorious thing
it can also break your heart.
If somewhere down the road
of life as lovers you have to part.

'My blouse hangs in shreds'... *gags him with the tatters*

Vetrov. I am unsure exactly what you are meaning...Be clear. Thank you. *leaves puzzled*

Your 'masterful leading man' is becoming 'too cocky'.... so you 'superbly seize the initiative'!.....

Thank you for your clarity! Why, Vetrov, my sweet! I think you are speaking switch! :)

Dam ! You just got me hard!

Thank you. This was my first story on EP. I think the rawness is appealing to everyone, the natural sensuality. This was 2 yrs. ago. I reposted an old story today that I am exploring today in my life. Go taste it and tell me what you think...:)

I will.

wow mmmmmmmm

*laughs* Night, billstickers!

I don't care how good the sex is, I buy expensive clothes, so any ripped or stretched garments will be replaced.

David Banner!!!!!!! Right??

I am not acquainted with the Hulk! LOL....:)

Ummmmmm This one! oops!

I did return here just to check. I don't forget much. Not words. :)

That is amazing thankyou for bringing me to a great feeling!

You are welcome, Steven! :)

Wonderful piece of prose, exactly what I wanted more of years ago in the erotic journals Paramour, Yellow Silk, & Libido. I miss those publications, but I am glad I have found yours... ;)

Thank you for your comments. :)


Yes? *laughing softly* That is all you have to say? :)

more, much more but only to you

That's the best way to work up a sweat!!!!!

LOL. It is better than soccer! LOL. :)

I read the responses below too and I agree that you've captured the spirit of your passion very well indeed. You could easily expand this to a short story if you wanted. Well done and thank you for sharing this.

Thank you. It must live the way it is...I have written other erotica. If you examine the responses below, they will lead you to them. I thank you for your comments. :)

You're welcome. Don't think the thought hasn't crossed my mind, but I was getting pretty sleepy. Will so peruse. :)

Thank you. *giggles* Enjoy. And do comment. It inspires me to write more....:)

Will do both. ;)

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Oh my...I so need this kind of experience!!

As do I.....Not bad for fiction, yes, memphis? LOL. Soon....:)

This vignette was pure fantasy...? Hm... Definitely a hot fantasy, & I sincerely hope you'll find your way soon to the kind of satiation that would follow shredded clothing -- even if no clothing was harmed. ;)

Not at all it sounds so very wonderful!!

*giggles* I have lots of passion! :)

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Ohhhh yesssssss. Again and again! I want you

Just seeing this now....Thank you, but I don't KNOW you! LOL. :)

You could get to know

well then let hughgo be the one to do the ripping tearing and the loving .

Thank you, but I have a love here on EP. Please follow the comments below to find the names of my other erotica. Glad you liked it. :)

wow, i love the story. very sexy and hot =]

Thank you. There are a few others. Follow the comments below to learn the titles. :)

ur welcome and okay =]

I want to rip my own clothes off after reading this!!! lol!! Hawt! Hawt! Hawt!! I know its an old story but still very Hawt!!

Thank you, Mahal! lol..Then DO read my featured story. Another old one, but brought back by popular demand. *winks* May I watch? :)

May I have the honor of participating? lol

In watching her rip off her clothing? You must ask her.

Assisting her in undressing. lol

As you wish...Bye.

Will do :)

Ok thats not showing up in the right sequence..... Will do is referring to your suggestion for me to read your other story :)

I removed it. It is in the I Like Intimate Moments forum. Called I Want You. I Need You. I Desire You. Thank you, Mahal.

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I just posted a more raw erotica. I write them rarely. It is old too, but my desire, my lust is new! LOL! Sit down before you read it! Thank you for your words, CWS! :)

WOW WOW....Wonderful. You seem to be a very passionate woman. You spray a fire with your words, which I could see and feel through the screen of my PC. Your partner is a blessed man. If you're together the air must crackle with passion, love and lust. Thank you for this wonderful and exciting post. I guess I should look after my partner now ;)))

Your words are fire! LOL. This was my first attempt at erotica. See the date? I have love on EP. But we shall meet this autumn. The air here is brimming with heartsong! My heart thanks you! Do enjoy! kissesssssssssssssss..Perhaps you would honor me with some erotica. I am curious on your love. My ex is gay.

This makes me...want.
More please.

Time. This is my earliest erotic piece! I have just a few more. Do you wish me to direct you? :)

Do it.

omg, so hot

this was written long ago. my first attempt at eroticism... everyone loves this! thank you! :)


WOW I am ready for more!!!

BAre Hugs

hi, friend! long time no see! this was old. I have written better. this is raw, untouched....thank you! :)

sorry I have been very busy. Yes I know it is an old story, but wonderful when it is raw and untouched.

bAre Hugs

Wow I need a shower.

Thank you! See my reply to risenphoenix. It lists another erotica you would like. This was my first attempt. :)

I know I commented previously, but just came upon the story again in my feed. I've always thought that this can be very erotic and sexy - passions heating up so quickly that there's no time to undress, no time to worry about damaging clothes, only time to rip them off to get at the delicious prize they hold! Have done this on occasion, and had no complaints just because her dress and panties were completely ruined in the process! :)