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Pretty Words

By: Norealidentity
Written on June 18th, 2010

I live in a dream of pretty words.
Nothing more, Nothing less.
These little lies are all that's heard.
Without emotion, Without disstress.
By: Norealidentity
Age: 18-21 , Female
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4 responses
  • Norealidentity
    Norealidentity

    Thank you

    Jul 7, 2010
    1 like
  • catlady90
    catlady90

    Beautiful and striking in its simplicity. I love small poems with gigantic dynamics between the lines (-: Good Job!

    Jul 6, 2010
    1 like
  • Norealidentity
    Norealidentity

    Thank You

    Jul 6, 2010
    1 like
  • blynnbarrister
    blynnbarrister

    A really nice little excerpt, I like the simpleness of the rhyme with the deeper meaning of the words. You should expand your poetry to further conquer the subject. Thank you for sharing, please continue to write :)

    Jul 6, 2010
    1 like