Post

Pretty Words


I live in a dream of pretty words.
Nothing more, Nothing less.
These little lies are all that's heard.
Without emotion, Without disstress.

Norealidentity Norealidentity 22-25, F 4 Responses Jun 18, 2010

Your Response

Cancel

Thank you

Beautiful and striking in its simplicity. I love small poems with gigantic dynamics between the lines (-: Good Job!

Thank You

A really nice little excerpt, I like the simpleness of the rhyme with the deeper meaning of the words. You should expand your poetry to further conquer the subject. Thank you for sharing, please continue to write :)