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Winter's Warning

Waiting for a glimpse or sign
Wondering if I've lost my mind.
Wandering fields of golden grass
Worrying heat that would not pass.
While the seasons slowly turning
Watching peats eternal burning.
Wishing frost to hit the moors
With waves of waters icy shores.
Westerly the skies stay blue
Whirls of summer colored hue.
Winding stronger ever still
Whispered winters coldest chill.
Where warmth ever on the rise
Wizend crops lie mortalized.
Whithered in the fevered heat
Weeping death and molded meat.
Wasted on the garden floor
Warning now there is no more.
Working harder at the till
Witness breaking of the will
When for naught has come to nill
Winter's coming for the kill.

~Maltesemermaid
 
maltesemermaid maltesemermaid 41-45, F 15 Responses Sep 5, 2012

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The poem reads well (: reminds me of "ode to autumn" by Keats.

thank you . . . that\'s what I was going for . . . 8D

LOL. All W's. I'll have to try that. Thanks for posting this. I like the lead up to the last line. Cheers.

haha . . . yeah it was a fun piece to write . . . thank you for taking the time to read and comment . . . am glad you liked . . . 8D

Wickedly wonderful, you wascally wabbit!!

HAHAHAHAHA . . . well played my friend . . . well played indeed . . . LMAO . . . 8D . . .

Love to make you laugh!!!

HEHEHEHEHE . . . and I love anyone who appreciates a good laugh . . . 8D

I'm learning, if you can't laugh, you can't live.

WOW . . . you are comical AND profound . . . I totally agree . . . god I LOVE to laugh . . . hahahahahaha . . . 8D

Such a wonderful sound...making me smile :D

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Wonderful...

WOW . . . wait . . . no wise @ss answer ? ! . . . I feel at a loss . . .hmmm . . .
ohhhh wait . . . . . . . . thank you . . . . . . hahahahahaha . . . . 8D

funny you should comment on that one now . . . we are predicted to get a blizzard on Friday thru Saturday . . . some places . . . like ours . . . up to 30 plus inches . . . eeesh . . . but kinda exciting . . . stocking up tomorrow . . .

Woozy in the head...What I typed I don't know...Wharf (barfing with throat choked)...WOT (Whacked out totally)

yeah . . . I get it . . . DOUBLE UU's . . . ha-ha-ha . . .

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amazing as ever my friend..always a pleasure..even if i am a little behind..lol..much love..big hugs...love the music and vid..delightful touch ..perfect ...xx

awww . . . you are always most kind . . . thank you sweetest . . . much love and bigs hugs back atcha . . . sooo happy you liked . . . thank you . . . xoxox . . .

Such haunting words, yet at the same moment quite stunning. Beautifully captured my friend.

thank you VERY much . . . 8D

Tremendous,great talent.

WOW . . . thank you sooo much . . . *beaming with pride* . . . I thank you . . . 8D

Lovely as always Ms. Mermaid. I enjoyed the song as well. Thanks for sharing. :)

thank you Ms. Kat . . . I'm happy you enjoyed . . . 8D . . .

amazing!

awww . . . thank you . . . 8D . . . *beams with pride* . . .

Very nice, I enjoyed.

thank you . . . I'm glad . . . 8D

This is amazing.....Cold and true but the beauty the words and video offer warm it up in spite of the message....What an wonderful contradiction you made here... ♥

wow . . . thank you Sierra . . . and thank you for your thoughtful comment . . . 8D

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Thanks so much for destroying my poem EP, I sure wasted my time, trying to get it in alignment.

thank you and thank you for sharing . . .

This is so beautiful have a "gift" thank you for letting us read and inspire us~ Wish you a gr8 New Yr~ 2013 has a nice ring! ;) The video very nice~

glad you like Candy and thank YOU . . . wishing you a safe happy healthy prosperous New Year . . . lol . . . indeed it does . . . 2013 . . . very lucky indeed . . . 8D

Wonderful and warm....The words flowed like water in a stream. The alliteration was wonderful too. Thank you for this. I must confess Decembers are severe for me. But I will try to change that with Forever man's arms tightly around me. The video? I do not like them accompanying poetry. But, in this case, the video suited the poem. And the singer's voice was soothing and resonated...Thank you for this loveliness. Kisses....

Wow . . . thank you so much my friend . . . high praise indeed . . . thank you Cynthia for this wonderful review and for your time in reading and reviewing . . .happiness always for you and forever man . . . 8D

I only speak the truth, maltesemermaid. Thank you for your wishes. xoxoox

Beautiful poem and the perfect song and video to go with it.

you're the best . . . thank you sweetie . . . you made my day . . . thanx for taking the time to read and your kind comment . . . 8D