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A Cake For You, My Friend

Here is a cake,
I baked it myself;
I filled it with love,
And left it on a shelf.
It's been sitting there,
For only god knows how long;
Just found it yesterday,
And...Oh dear god that looks wrong.
There's a graveyard of flies,
Coating the top;
My friend accidentally dropped it,
And swept it up with a mop.
The dog may have licked it,
and it's covered in hair;
My girlfriend stepped in it,
She didn't know it was there.
Some ants may have colonized,
So you might want to avoid the middle;
And what's that under the whipped cream...?
I'm not solving that riddle.
My mother found it on Wednesday,
And put it back as good as new;
Then accidentally knocked it off,
And it landed in dog- eww.
My cousin came over for a visit,
And though my mother warned him twice;
He was scratching his hair,
Now the cake's filled with lice.
So I found it and boxed it as a gift,
Because you're my dearest friend;
Though it may be too late when you find this,
And your good graces may end.
Heh...it's probably fine,
And on your table it probably sits;
I wouldn't advise eating it,
Or you'll have a severe case of the shi-
Kyroe Kyroe 18-21, M 9 Responses Dec 6, 2012

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I think everyone has said it all. Absolutely brilliant poem. I enjoyed reading it. :)

Glad you liked it ^_^

Hahaha, this is brilliant!

Thanks.

Dude, So good. I'll be reading this every time i feel down... Actually laughing! no lie

Thanks for the compliment ^_^

awww.

Lol :)

Wow ur amazing! That was really funny and nice rhyming too :D

Thank you ^_^

You're welcome :)

Love the poem! i will give you one! (its not about me btw!;)
my beard grows to my toes
I never wear no clothes
I wrap my hair around my bare
and down the road i goes! :)

Nice ^_^

Ha ha.Thanks for a laugh.

You're welcome.

the cake is no more edible but it was a funny poem..good one!

Good to know that it was well-received. (The poem, not the cake, haha)

LOL HILLARIOUS!! HAHAHA!!!

Lol, that's what I was going for XD

lol you seriously kicked the *** of all poetry :P haha I'm still laughing

Lol, the message section of the gifts had a character limit, and I wanted to go with a poem, so I decided to just link it instead. Once I figured out what kind of poem I wanted to go with, it all flowed from there. Glad you liked it :)