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I Love You

I love you more than I can say
Throughout my thoughts in every way
And with great affections I display
My need for you grows every day
You are my sunshine; you are my ray
Within your oceans; within your bay
Submerged in you is where I play
Then upon your shores without delay
To bring you pleasure if I may
This lust for you that I relay
My entire being I would pay
At your feet for me to lay
Without excuses or shades of grey
As long as I know it is okay
Made for you I am your clay
Formed to fit without a fray
I come to you as lovers prey
To listen I shall always obey
And from you I shall never stray
For I love you Sir more every day.
I love you Sir singing hip hip horray!! 

LOL . . . ahhh . . . you make me so silly happy . . .
my love  . . .  my joy . . . my Master . . .
 . . . MUAHHHH . . .

~Maltesemermaid
maltesemermaid maltesemermaid 41-45, F 8 Responses Dec 12, 2012

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i read it like 5 times

WOW . . . 8D . . . thank you . . .

that was really good, wish i could write like you

wow . . . thank you very much . . . 8D

wow

cool . . . 8D

A wonderful poem!

awww . . . thank you so much . . . glad you liked . . . 8D

Really wonderful,Bravo :-)

thank you very much . . . so glad you liked . . . 8D

Oh Miss Mermaid, I simply love this poem. It has a lovely flow about it. I agree with Sierra, something you can dance too. hugs+smiles***

how wonderful . . . thank you my dear friend . . . I love it . . . dancing is filled with joy and that my friend is the feeling of love . . . hugs and smiles right back atcha . . . 8D

liked reading the poetry... it got its own flow....
good one maltesemermaid :)

how wonderful . . . thank you very much xenonitez . . . 8D

This just TOTALLY ROCKED!! Reading it sends such a good vibe you could put it to a beat and dance to it!!

HAHAHA . . . that is exactly what I was trying to get across . . . that silly joy of love . . . thank you Sierra for noticing . . . my spritely friend . . . LOL . . . 8D

Awww how cool is that!!!! I love it when stuff like that happens!! :)