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I Want People to Share Their Poetry

Lose Yourself

By: maltesemermaid
Written on December 15th, 2012
Age: 41-45 , Female
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14 responses
  • sierra33

    Wow.....This is one I will come back to read again and again. Like some movies you need to watch a couple times to pick up all the nuances...... You put so much into everything to write... :)

    Dec 18, 2012
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    • maltesemermaid

      WOW indeed . . . very cool . . . thank you Sierra . . . 8D . . . makes my day . . .

      Dec 18, 2012
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  • Glad2Chat

    You're pure energy!

    Dec 17, 2012
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    • maltesemermaid

      I am ? . . . hahaha . . . thanx . . . but I think not . . . least lately . . . Eminem . . . now that's pure energy . . . thank you for stopping by my new friend . . . and for reading listening and commenting . . . truely appreciatated . . . 8D

      Dec 17, 2012
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  • mustbnemi

    Guns and Roses are touring India...they want your lyrics! :-)

    Dec 16, 2012
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    • maltesemermaid

      sometimes I cannot tell if you are serious or sarcastic . . . I LIKE IT . . . hahahaha . . . 8D

      Dec 17, 2012
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  • jerkina

    Thank you this really answers my post, "So who am I" It just so happens naturally;)

    Dec 16, 2012
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    • maltesemermaid

      wow . . . how cool is that . . . thank YOU . . . 8D

      Dec 16, 2012
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  • raedeejay

    enjoyed - funny & serious at the same time,

    Dec 15, 2012
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  • 2011A

    Sister of mine: So eloquent as usual in verse! I do admire your abilities to capture, to flow, and to engage us....Your words are like a tsunami....taking me in, helpless, but to go with you.....Kissessssssssssssssss....Nice to read upon first wakening...xoxo

    Dec 15, 2012
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    • maltesemermaid

      oh sister of mine . . . my deepest thanx to you for such a rave review . . . as always . . . love you . . . 8D

      Dec 15, 2012
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  • justjessy

    Very well done and so mood lifting to read.

    Dec 15, 2012
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    • maltesemermaid

      thanx jessy . . . and thank you for taking the time to read and comment . . . glad it you liked . . . 8D

      Dec 15, 2012
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