Post
Experience Project iOS Android Apps | Download EP for your Mobile Device

I Edited My Poem "i Want To Tell You A Story" Which One Do You Like?

I posted the first version right after I wrote it and then I redid it, which do you like best one or too?
I WANT TO TELL YOU A STORY (one)
I want to tell you a story,
I want to tell you a story that will make your life better.
I want to tell you a story of pain,
I want to tell you a story of survival.
I want to tell you a story of hope,
I want to tell you a story of happiness.
I want to tell you a story of love,
I want to tell you a story that will make you feel better.
I want to tell you a story of success,
I want to tell you a story that will make everything bad go away.
I want to save your life
That is the story I want to tell you

I WANT TO TELL YOU A STORY (TOO)
I want to tell you a story,
One that will make your life better.
I want to tell you a story of pain,
To tell you a story of survival.
One that will give you hope,
I want to tell you a story of happiness.
To tell you a story of love,
One that will make you feel better.
I want to tell you a story of success,
To tell you a story that will make everything bad go away.
I want to save your life
This is the story that I want to tell you.

Chelebub Chelebub 51-55, F Jan 22, 2013

Your Response

Cancel