I'm still sitting here
in this dark, wet room,
waiting for you
to find me...

I hope you will come,
kiss me softly with your lips
touch me softly with your hands...
Showing me your love...

I can even feel you,
feel the beats of your heart on me,
feel the passion deep inside of you
feel your love...

But for now,
I'm just sitting here,
in this dark, wet room,
still hoping you will really come...

misunderztood misunderztood
18-21, F
3 Responses Mar 8, 2009

Excellent writing. It is exactly how I sometimes feel. Keep up the good work!

I Know for sure there's so much more in this life for me,<br />
I see it in the mountains In the rivers in the streams I see it in the wild flowers and when I touch the trees.<br />
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In the morning,when the sun comes up,I look towards the sky and say to the earths great spirt,Oh!why Oh!why great spirt can't can't I fly?<br />
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To the woods I go,in the sun shine the rain even in the snow!I feel a peace,like nothing I've ever felt befor.<br />
It's some what like when I try to picture being in side one of heavens doors.<br />
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The land I love it's like, it speaks to me.I reach to embrace the beauty of it all, I am not just me,I now can say we. I to love poetry,My mother raised us on poetry.Thanks for letting me share this with you!

i like your story thats realy cool