Your Mommy Loves You Always,

Dearest Baby,

of what

loss

let the world

crash and

burn

to build another

bridge of

tears

for you.

RoTTenKoRn RoTTenKoRn
18-21, F
1 Response Mar 18, 2009

How about a poetic response to your poem?<br />
<br />
I forced<br />
a sharp breath in<br />
and held it until it<br />
cut<br />
<br />
my<br />
<br />
heart<br />
<br />
and I felt the burn<br />
as I crashed <br />
<br />
until<br />
your tears put <br />
<br />
out the fire<br />
<br />
I loved your poem. Keep writin' You're good.