My Story That I Been Writing

     Here's the story that I have been writing. I don't know what to call it at all. Any suggestions would be nice.

CHAPTER ONE




    Amber had the filling that she had to get away from Ron Summers, who keeps on abusing her. All that she managed take with her was her purse and her cell phone plus the charger. The guy never knew that she took it with her. The whole time she called her brother and told him ever thing. She just was to scared to leave Ron. Ron had kidnapped her from her  nice home in St. George, Utah.
    Amber remembered being in her house when a guy came to her door asking to0 use her telephone. She let him in to be nice and didn’t realizing later he would take her. He came be hind her and put something over her moth that put her to sleep. He grabbed her along with her purse that was in her hand. She struggled some when he first grabbed her from behind her. Because there was a broken lamp. She woke up several hours later in a apartment in New York City. She didn’t know how she had gotten there.
    Her servants came running to see what the load noise was and saw what was broken. They started to search the whole house inside and out side. They knottiest that Amber was no where to be fond. So they called the police with in minutes. They also called her family after they where done talking to the police on the phone. Her family came over really fast, because they don’t live that far from Amber. Her parents were just shocked and they didn’t know why some body would want to take her. Her parents answered all the questions that the police where asking.  Her brother David was the most shocked of any one there.  Because it was his little sister that was taken, they where always talking to each other all the time.
    Growing up Amber learned how to play the piano. She also sang really good. Amber spent a lot of time with her brothers. Her bedroom was up in the attic area. Her parents had the bedroom built for her. It has a bathroom just for her. They also put in two doors in order to go up to her room. A bay window that is her favorite place to sit. Her own living room, a big walk in closet. An area that every one knew when she was in that spot to not talk to her about what was bothering her. She also has windows along the front area of the room. The bedroom doors that only Amber has the key to them. Amber always kept the key’s with her, that way no one could get in her room.
    Ron Summer could not believe that he had done what his sister Kandace had told him to do. He usually didn’t like doing what she wanted him to do. But when she saw a guy that she wanted she did just about any thing to have him. Kandace Saw Ron Crosby talking to Amber. Amber always had a summer party on the day that summer started, some times it was the day before, if summer started on a Sunday.  Amber would invite all the Neighbors in her Neighbor hood. Ben was about to ask Amber out on a date when she went missing.
    Ron never got him self in trouble when he was growing up. Now he seems to be getting in trouble all the time. His parents had given up on him. Ron had been in very good behavior for a while, when Kandace wanted him to get rid of Amber. Ron didn’t want to do anything to get him in trouble. Ron and Kandace where from New York City. Kandace decided to go to Dixie College instead of NYU. That is why he took her to New York City. Ron had been visiting Kandace for the summer. He hadn’t seen her for quiet awhile. Now he knew that he was in trouble for kidnapping her.
    Bill O’Conner had met Amber several times when she would visit New York City. Amber would go to New York, when her parents would fly of to their favorite vacation location. They even have their own property there. They would take Rebekah and Dustin with them all the time with them. They always thought that Amber was afraid to fly. Well they didn’t know that Amber was not afraid to fly at all. She had been to every State including Washington D.C., she would visit them for the history. Because Amber loves history, she already knows all of Utah history. So she wanted to learn about the other states history. Bill knows Amber’s step dad and he was introduced to Amber by her dad.

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    Amber had been missing for over three years when she finally decided to get away from Ron. He told her to stay in the apartment building and to not go any wear out side except for the court yard. The land lord happened to be nice to Amber. He made sure that she always went with out any thing. The apartment was in a very nice part of the city. Ron wanted to make sure that Amber to be nice and comfortable as possible. He didn’t want her to be in a terrible place, while he was hiding her. The apartment had one bedroom for Amber. A very nice big kitchen wear Amber could cook her meals. A dinning room for a guests that would come over from the apartment building. The living room was nicely decorated and had a nice view of the city. Amber liked to look out at the city, she even had a balcony in her bed room. Ron happened to be paying for the apartment for her, because he has a nice paying job. His parents where very prod of him for stating out his life.
    Amber remembered when she fond out that she had a house of her own and that it was already paid for. It was just before she graduate from high school. She had just gotten home from school with out Rebekah. Amber had driven home from school after waiting for Rebekah for ten whole minutes. She finally gave up on her and went home. Their parents had gone out of town and left the car for them to use the last week of school. They would not be home until the day before they would be graduating from school. When Amber got home her parents were already home. They where glade to see her and they wanted to know where Rebekah was at. So Amber told them wear she was. They wear not very surprised that Rebekah would not listen to them. She thought that she could do what ever she wanted to do. Rebekah had been like that ever scents they had turn 18.    
    Amber thought that they where going to be home a little later. They choose to be home two hours earlier then they had planed from their nice trip to Las Vegas. They told her sister and her that they would be home when they would be getting out from school and they wanted both of them home. They where to not go any where while they were gone and they were to stay to gather no matter what. Well Rebekah had chose to not listen to what they had told them. All week she had been spending it with Dustin and his parents. Well they surprised her really good. Amber called Rebekah and told her to get her butt home.
    Nate Woods had worked for a lot of rich people over the years. He works for Bill O’ Conner for most of his life. Bill was the one that told him to tell Amber about the house that she would be getting when she graduates. Bill had decided to make sure that she would be well taken care of for the rest of her life. He had talked to her parents about it and the thought that it was a good idea. Because they where selling their house and moving in with her grandparents. They didn’t want her to have to live at her grandparents house. Nate traveled all the way from New York City to tell her what her graduation present was. She just would not find out the person who would pay for everything in tell it was necessary. So it was going to be like the movie Daddy Long Legs.  A movie that Amber had seen and likes to watch it. She ha grown up watching all the old musicale movies and also watching John Wayne western movies.
    Nate Woods showed up at Amber’s house just as Rebekah was getting home. It was about four in the after noon when Rebekah decided to come home. Rebekah let Nate in the home with her and he asked to see Amber. Nate choose to talk to Amber in the living room and he didn’t mind that the rest of the family was in the same room. They all wanted to see what her face looked like when she got the good news. Nate told Amber to sit down, that way it would be easier to talk to her. He told her that she had been given a nice house that has very nice property. She was told where the property was and that it has ten acres big. With a tennis court and a swimming pool for her. They all knew that she would absolutely love the swimming pool the most. The house has ten bed rooms and nine and half baths. One of the bed rooms is on the main level of the house. There would be a butler, cook, two maids, and a personal driver.
    Nate even told her that it also has a nice library in the house for all of the books that she has collected. A pool house by the pool, that ay she could have a nice place to go in to change. A kitchen that would have all the latest kitchen equipment. She could choose to cook or have her cook for her. Amber could even choose to eat in the kitchen or in the dinning room, that is just off of the kitchen. A living room some entertainment equipment in it. It would be mostly a room to relax in with a TV. to watch. An entertainment room, where you could watch movies. A parlor room to great guests in and a privet place to talk in. In all a really nice house anyone would want to have and nicely decorated in the style that she likes. Nate even told her that it over looked St. George.

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    Amber had a hard time being a way from her family. She missed them so much. Ron would come and see her every day and expect her to have dinner done for him. If it wasn’t he would beat her really hard. He would even beat her for what ever reason, he didn’t care much for her at all. He even beat her if she left her apartment. The land lord was really worried about Amber. To Tim Smith she was a very sweet girl that didn’t belong there in New York. Tim tried  to find a safe place that he could hide Amber from Ron. Tim finally found a family member that would be willing to take Amber in.  Well that did not work, because Ron fond the hospital that she was at and took her back to the apartment when she was better. Ron got to the hospital before Tim could get there. When Ron beat Amber so bad, he hit her in the head really hard that she lost some of her memory.
    Amber knew sooner or later she might end up dead. So that was when she choose to start packing her clothes . Amber called her sister the day before so she would have time to get to New York. Amber had been packing her cloths for a while, ever time that Ron left she would pack her cloths. Ron showed up that morning and saw Amber packing. He got really made and beat her really hard. Amber just hoped that Rebekah would get there so she could leave. Rebekah had brought her husband with her to get Amber. Ron hoped that he had scared Amber so bad that she would not say a thing for a long time. He did not want to be found out that he had killed one of his old girlfriends. It was an accident, he did not mean to kill her. It was hunting him all the time, that is why he treats women so badly.
    When Rebekah got to the apartment building, she was meet by Tim. He was glade to see someone coming to get Amber. He took them up to Amber’s apartment and let them in. They found Amber hiding out in the bathroom. She had looked her self in there so that Ron could not hurt her any more. They tried to get  her to come  out of the bathroom. The FBI in New York where working along side with the police in Utah. The FBI showed up just after Rebekah and Dustin. They had been to the hospital and got told were they could find Tim Smith. Tim took them up to Amber’s apartment. He did not know that the FBI was also looking for Amber. Tim thought that he was in some kind of trouble. He gave them the description and name of the guy who kept coming to see Amber every day. They talked to Rebekah and Dustin, they asked them all kinds of questions.
    Amber would call her sister and leave her all kinds of disturbing messages on her cell phone. But the day before  Rebekah had actually answered her cell phone. She told them that Amber sounded like she was really scared and wanted them to come get her really fast. Rebekah and Dustin managed to get the next flight to New York City. They did not pack that much stuff, because they where in a hurry to get to the airport. Rebekah told them tat she was in the bathroom and was not coming out of it. Amber still thought that the guy was still there in the apartment. Amber did not know what his name was. Tim did not know what the guys name was also.
    Rebekah went and talked to Amber from the out side of the door. She told her that she was the only one at the door. So Amber let her in the bathroom. One of the agents also went in the bathroom with Rebekah. They were both shocked to see the way that Amber looked, they tried their best at cleaner her up the best that they could. Amber didn’t talk to them at all about what happened to her. Because she could not remember that much at all. Her memory was not the best right now. The FBI agents let Rebekah and Dustin to take Amber back home, were she would be around familiar surrounding. They figured that Amber could get her memory back. She would be able to talk to them there much better. Before the FBI let Amber go they asked her if Ron had rapped her at all, so Amber told them no. That was one thing that Ron did not want to do to her, he didn’t want to rape her at all.
    Dustin got the plane tickets that they would need to get back to Utah. Rebekah helped Amber to finish packing all of her cloths. Tim told them to not worry about the rest of the stuff, because it could be an apartment Amber could stay in when she ever went back to New York. He even told Amber that there would not be any rent on the apartment. In other words it would be rent free for as long as Amber wanted to keep the apartment. Amber liked that idea, seen that she loved visiting New York City. Dustin got them a taxi cab, that would take them to JFK Airport. When the taxi cab got there they loaded it with all the logged that had her cloths in. As they left for the airport, the FBI stayed there just in case Ron showed up later.
    Ron showed up just a couple hours after Amber left for the airport. He went up to the apartment and got a very big surprise. He ended up finding the FBI agents in the room instead of finding Amber in it. They arrested him right there on the spot. They charged him with kidnapping and for the abuse that he kept doing to Amber. Amber was finally glade to be going home to Utah were she could be very safe and surrounded by the people who care so much about her. Her parents would be heading to her house when they got the word she was home were she would be safe and sound.

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    They landed in Utah some time in the morning. They knew that they would have a long drive a head of them to get down to St. George. Dustin went and got the car while Amber and Rebekah waited for the logged. They had some one help them get the logged out to the car and put it in the car. After the car was loaded they started the long drive.  Amber slept part of the way down to St. George. She even didn’t even talk that much about what happened to her. Amber was still to scared to say anything, she just wanted to be in a nice safe place. They stopped around Santaquin to get some apples. In Nephi they got some lunch and gas in the car. Amber just enjoyed the ride and the scenery out side the car.
    It was night fall by the time that they got to Amber’s house. There were lights on in the house. Amber just didn’t remember that the house was hers, she thought that it was Rebekah and Dustin’s house. Before they left New York , they where told that her memory was not all there. So she wouldn’t remember certain things in her life. When they got in the house Rebekah took Amber up to her room and got her settled in. Dustin brought the logged up to her room. Dustin had his parents living in the house with them while Amber was not there. They loved being down in St. George, with the nice warm weather. Which was a lot of help with Cindy. Ben was over there to talk with Dustin, seen they had become really good friends. Ben and Rebekah were physiologists, Jack has his own practices. When Rebekah getters her doctorate, he would make her a partner in his office.
    Amber did not feel like eating any thing, she didn’t eat that much at lunch time. So Amber got in to the shower to help her feel better. Her maid Lizzey went to see if she needed any help, she helped Amber comb out her long hair. Ron would not let Amber cut her hair, so her hair was really long. Amber was having a hard time combing her hair and it was giving her really bad head aches. Lizzey noticed that her forehead was bleeding a little bit. So she got the first aid kit and cleaned it off to put a band aid on it. Jack decided to stay over that night, just in case Amber wanted someone to talk to.
    Ben had always had a crush on Amber, from the first time he ever saw her. From the first day that she moved in, he saw her and feel in love. He choose to start out as friends, that way they could get to know each other slowly. Amber like the way that he looked and his personality. Dustin told him that Amber might not remember him at all. Jack didn’t care, he would just reintroduce him self to her. When Amber saw him a gain it was like the very first time all over a gain. Amber asked Rebekah who he was. She told him that he was Jack the next door neighbor.
    Amber was having a hard time sleeping, she kept picturing Ron abusing her. Jack heard her talking in her sleep and woke her up from the night mar she was having.  Jack went down to the kitchen to get some hot chocolate for Amber to drink. He some how knew that it would com her down some and would help her to sleep. Amber choose to tell him some of what had happened to her. She didn’t know what made her all of a sudden to talk. Amber just felt very comforter around Jack. She just didn’t understand why. Amber just kept on talking while Jack listened to what she was saying. She didn’t want to be left alone, when she was down talking. So Jack stayed with her the rest of the night.
    The next morning Rebekah decided to check in with Amber and see how she was doing. She found Amber sound a sleep curled up next to Jack. Ben was a wake, he was just watching Amber sleep. Ben shushed Rebekah from talking to load as he got up. They went out side the room and he told her that Amber talk to him most of the night. That she didn’t want to be left alone. Ben had broken up with Kandace the week before. Rebekah some how knew that Kandace would be looking for him. Kandace just thought that he was joking when Ben broke up with her.
    Kandace showed up that morning trying to find Jack. She was not going to give up on Jack. She thought that she could still get him to love her. Ben just didn’t like her at all. He did not like her personality, she likes to be the center of attention. Kandace was so mad, because she thought Ben was home. Well he had spent most of the night talking to Amber. Amber didn’t remember that the house was hers. She thought that the house was Rebekah and Dustin’s. Kandace started yelling at Ben for not being home. Rebekah had to force them to go in the parlor, so they would not wake Amber up.
    Kandace finally told the truth that it was her idea to get rid of Amber. Ben was mad and Rebekah was just shocked. Kandace seamed to be a sweet kind of girl. No body thought that she would do something mean. She looked very innocent to every one that knows her. Ben was really mad at this point at her, he didn’t know what to say. They need her to tell the police what she told them. Kandace plainly refused to tell the police. Because she thought that they would charge her for conspiracy of kidnapping. At lest the charges would not be that bad has her brother‘s charges.
    Amber came down after she had gotten up and dressed. She came down stares to get some breakfast. Kandace thought that Amber would remember her, well Amber didn’t even know who she was. Kandace was just leaving to talk to the police. After Amber got some breakfast, she went out side to sit. She loved to lookout over the valley. That was always Ambers favorite thing to do, because she got the chance to think. Rebekah and Jack thought that Amber heard what had been said. Amber only heard a little bit of what was said. She thought that Jack was in apart of the scheme of what had happened to her.

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    Growing up Amber spent a lot of time with her older brothers. The age difference between the oldest and Amber was six years. Amber happened to be the youngest in the whole family. She just didn’t remember any of them. Her brothers names are Eric and David. David spent the most of the time with Amber, he was always there for her. When he found out, he was really mad that he was not there to protect her. He blamed him self for what had happened to her. He felt like he should have been there to keep her from being taken.
    Amber was remembering something about her and Rebekah. While they were growing up every thing had to be about Rebekah , with her in the center of attention. Rebekah was pretty much spoiled rotten. She always got her own way all the time. When ever they had birthdays her parents always got her birthday presents and they would forget about Amber. It was even that way for Christmas. Rebekah even was the center of attention in young women’s. Amber was sick and tired of being felt like second best all the time. She felt like her parents liked Rebekah better then her. The leaders in young women’s where worried about Amber. No one in young women’s ever talked to her, she got to the point were she didn’t go to the activates that where planed. Amber would only go to the combined activates.
    When ever they celebrated their birthdays, Amber spent most of the time in her room. Her parents had put a look on her bedroom door. Amber knew that they would not have any presents to give her. Amber’s bed room was very nice. She had a nice bay window that had a place for her to sit on. On their sixteenth birthday. Her parents had gotten presents for her, but they had marked them all to Rebekah. Amber was mad and so she went to her room and locked the door. She didn’t feel like talking to any one. Amber just sat and looked out her window. Her parents realized that they had marked them all to Rebekah, when some of them where for Amber. They felt so bad, so they sent her pet cats into her room. They always made sure that the cats gave her something even if it was for them. The cats names are prince and beauty, they happen to be Amber’s pet cats.
    Her cats brought to her toys that she could play with them with. Amber’s parents started trying to talk to her throw the door. Amber finally let them in. They felt so bad about how they had treated her. Rebekah always got what she wanted for dinner on their birthday. Amber also didn’t have any friends at school, she usually was by her self. a lot of the teachers and other administrators at the school like to make sure that she had a nice time at school. They felt bad for the way people where treating people.
    Some of the guys at school would even buy her lunch for her. They liked to talk to her more then to her sister. Rebekah would like to still any guy that would talk to her and that would take her out on dates. Their parents had created the problem them self. The principle tried to talk to her parents about the problem. Even the leaders in young women’s and young men tried to tell them. They just would not listen to any one. Well now they realized that they had a problem on their hands now. That night they talked about what they would do to fix the problem.
    Amber didn’t want Rebekah to know that she was staring to remember part of their up bringing. She didn’t know who to tell her. She had never had to confront some body before. So she talked to Jack about what she was starting to remember about her past. The doctors said that she would start to remember the past before she ever starts to remember the present. Amber had been in the library and was looking at her year books. She realized that not  many people had signed her year books in jr. high and high school. The only ones that had were mostly the guys and the teachers. When Amber was in school she got all A’s. where Rebekah got mostly B’s and C’s.
     Rebekah fond Amber in the library. Amber talked to her bout their child hood, and wanted to know why Rebekah had gotten most of the attention. So Rebekah told her why, their parents just seemed to care more about Rebekah then Amber. Amber wasn’t that mad at Rebekah. She just didn’t understand why Rebekah was always had to be the center of attention all of the time. Rebekah had started to not be so much in the center 0f attention.  Amber also wanted to know hwy she has never seen their parents property. So Rebekah told her that they thought over the years that Amber was afraid to fly in a plane. They also thought that Amber would not like their nice property. The only way Amber ever saw it was in pictures that they took of it.
      Amber remembered looking at the pictures that they gave her to look at. The property was up in the mountains and the only way in and out was to fly in. They had a nice fishing loge. They even had some cabins that people would stay in. There was some camping sites for those who felt like sleeping in tents. They had someone that would come twice a year bring in supplies. In the winter time people loved going there to skate on the lake. The lake was not that big, but big enough for their dads pontoon boat to be on it. The fishing log and cabins where always decorated to look like ginger bread houses. Even the pine trees that where by the cabins had lights on them.
    Amber’s family where trying to think of how they would be able to help her get her memory back. The police and FBI agents wanted her to have her memory back. All the stuff that she was remembering was in her past, not the present. The doctor told them that she would most  likely not want to remember what had happened to her for over three years that she was missing.

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    When Amber got back, she had been seeing a doctor that was helping her get her memory back. He told her that she should look and go to place she had been. He even told her parents to make every thing as normal for her as possible. They still had her pet cats prince and beauty.  
    Amber didn’t even remember that in high school her and Ben dated. In high school, they spent a lot of time to gather. When they stated to date each other Rebekah tried to keep them apart. Rebekah always liked to still  any guy that Amber would try to date. Even though she had a boy friend of her own. Amber got mad at her, their parents tried to get Rebekah to do chores around the house. Amber and Ben had always been friends for  along time. She did not remember any of it.

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    Ben thought of a way to get her memory back of them dating. He decided to recreate their first date that they had. Their first date was to see the lights on temple square. Jack took Amber to see the lights, then they went to dinner. They spent most of the time just talking and having fun without Rebekah around to ruin the date. Rebekah liked to still the thunder from Amber all the time. She only cared about her self. When ever Jack took Amber on a date, he made sure that Rebekah was not around at all. Because she would want to go along with them. The thing about Jack and Amber they started out as just being friends. He was only one of the few friends that Amber had. They would just hang out at her house all the time.
    Ben choose to take Amber to see the lights on temple square after they had been turned on all ready. He would also take her on a nice carriage ride around the city. They would go to the same restraint that they went to on their very first date. He just had to choose the right time, when they both would not be busy at all. Amber wanted to go up Big Cottonwood Canyon. She hadn’t been up there in a long time. What she doesn’t remember that she owns a house up that canyon . Amber had always loved going to Big Cottonwood canyon to go camping. So Bill found out from her dad, that’s when he decided to buy her a house in that canyon.
    For Amber’s fourteenth birthday Bill O’Conner had gotten a house up Big Cottonwood Canyon. He knew that it was her favorite canyon to go up. The house happens to be hind a fence so that no one could poll up to the house. Bill wanted it to be secured so that no body could get in to hurt Amber. The house was pretty big. It looked like a Manson. That’s because it was a Manson. The Manson has eight bedrooms and nine bathrooms. A nice entrapment room, even a indoor pool (just for Amber). A very nice library filled with all the books that Amber would ever want to read. The kitchen has every new appliance that any one would want. A nice big dinning room, for family dinners.
    There was a nice patio out back. It had a very nice barbeque, A table to sit around. Even a fire pit for camp fires, chairs and couches to sit on. A nice garden area for growing plants. The front has flower gardens and solar lights leading up to the house. Out back there are tickly torches. When ever they where out back they would light the tickly torches. Ambers family tried to have family get to gathers in the summer time. That way the whole family would be able to get out of the valley. There are place on the property for tents to be set up at. Ambers room happens to be the master bed room. She did not allow any pets to be brought to her house. Because her house was up Big Cottonwood Canyon.

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    Ron was very mad, he had just been arrested by the FBI.  He never thought that he would get caught at all. The FBI where hopping that Amber would remember what had happened to her. So, far Amber wasn’t remembering any thing at all. If she would remember, then they would have a case. With out a case, they could not hold Ron for that long at all. The FBI, sent Ron back to Utah. Hopping that the police there cold hold him longer.
    The Salt Lake City Police could not hold Ron for that long. They didn’t have any  thing to hold him on. For Amber hadn’t even pressed any charges at all. So, they just let Ron go free.. They hopped that he would stay away from Amber. They even let his sister go as well. They didn’t have any thing to hold her. The police could only hope that they would stay away from Amber. All that they would need was some kind of proof of them wanting to hurt Amber. But they didn’t want to see Amber end up in the hospital at all.
    Kandace told Ron that Amber was back in Utah. She knew right where she was at. She wanted to have her out of her way. So that she could have Jack back. She knew as long as Amber was around. Jack would never be hers at all. For jack has always loved Amber. Not Kandace at all. Kandace had loved him, and wanted him any way that she could have him.
    So, Ron and Kandace drove back to St. George. Al the way down they cam up with a way to get rid of Amber. They hoped that they would not get caught at all. For, if they did. They would end up in prison for quit some time. They didn’t want that at all. So, they would be very careful to not get caught at all. Ron would yell at Amber for leaving New York and the apartment. What they didn’t know was that she didn’t have memory of any thing at all. Amber couldn’t remember any thing that had happened to her at all.

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    Amber was having a hard time remembering things at all. She was having a hard time remembering her past. Amber still thought that she was living in someone else’s house. That it wasn’t her house at all. She still wasn’t eating that much food. Amber for some reason was not eating that much. The doctors said that it would take time for every thing to come back to her. They said that even her appetite would eventually come back. It would just take time for it to come back. That it would help to cook some of her favorite foods.
    So, they decided to have a nice barbeque. They would cook some of her favorite foods. They would even have lemonade to drink. They would even invite some on the neighbors  from the neighborhood. That way, Amber could have a good time for a change. That way she will be around people that she knows. They where hoping that it would help jog some of her memory. They would even have her whole family there as well.
    David was so happy to see Amber again. For it had been quit some time. They had a whole lot to ketch up on. While, Amber had been gone. He had some kids. They didn’t know her at all. He wanted Amber to get know them. But for right now. Amber wouldn’t remember any one at all. Her family hoped tat this would help her. Little did they know that Ron and Kandace where going to be there. They had some how been invited. Amber’s family didn’t care for them at all.
    For they where the resin that Amber was gone for so long. Seeing how Kandace wanted Amber out of the way. She had always been jealous of Amber. David had shown up early/ So, that he could help set up for the party. Amber was spending the day in her room. She didn’t feel like going out side at all. The rest of the family was down stairs getting things all set up. They hopped that eventually, Amber would want to come down stairs
    “ Hey Rebekah. How is Amber doing?” David asked. As he went into the kitchen.
    “ She seems to be doing some what better. She has been talking to Ben.” Rebekah answered. She was making one of Amber’s favorite salad.
    “ That’s good. At least she is talking to some one. I hope that she will get her memory back soon.” David said.
    “ We, all do. Apparently she has been talking in her sleep. II think that she has been saying your name. But, I’m not to sure. “ Rebekah said.
    “ Ah. Well we are really close to each other. I wonder why didn’t call me at all. I would have loved to have gone and got her.” David said.
    “ I don’t know why. I guess that the only one that she remembered was Rebekah. That is something that we are still trying to figure out.” Rebekah said.

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    While every one was setting up. They didn’t notice that Amber had gone outside. She was sitting on her favorite swing. Amber had always liked her porch swing. It was in the back yard. In the pretty spot. There where flowers that grew all around it. Even some roses that where growing on the sides of the swing. Amber had always liked her rose the most. They would bloom all year long.
    Her family had been taking a very good care of the roses. For they happen to be Amber’s pride an d joy. She had planted them, when she moved in to the house. She had some Joseph cotes growing. They where the ones the where grown up the sides of her swing. They had been trained to grow around the polls of the swing. Amber liked that a whole lot. She thought that she would never see them again. For when she was in New York , she wasn’t allowed to grow any thing. Ron wo0uldn’t let her have a garden at all. A lot of the neighbors would give her some of what they had grown.

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    Amber was out tending her roses when Ron snuck up be hind her. She didn’t see him sneak up on  her at all. For the next thing she knew, he was talking to her.
    “I thought that I had told you to stay in the apartment.” Ron said.
    “What apartment? I don’t know what you are talking about. I don’t know who you are.” Amber said right back.
    “Well maybe this will help you remember who I am.” Ron said, has he started to hit her. He had picked up some kind of wood. He had found a wood post. She was in a aria that no one would know what was going on. They where not in the view of any one at all.
    Ron knew the lay out of Ambers property. The back yard looked so nicely done up. She had an aria that she grew nothing but  roses. She had a porch swing in that aria. She also has another porch swing that is right on the patio. That aria was where her barbeque’er was at. She had a nice barbaque’er. It had an aria to store food for grilling. A spot to wash your hand and to mix up some drinks. A very nice table to eat at. Other places to sit as well.
    There was an aria for swimming. A lot of people liked to swimming in Ambers swimming pool. She also has a very nice tennis court. Amber has always liked the way that her back yard looks. She even has palm trees.

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    “Hey Ben. Why don’t you right in.” Eric said. As he answered the front door.
    Ben came right in the house. He had brought his step brother with him.
    “ Hi. How is Amber doing, sense I last saw her?” Ben asked. As he cam into the living room.
    “ She seems to be doing some what better. She has been up in her room all day.” David said. He was back in the living room.
    “ Who did you bring with you?” Eric asked. He had just noticed that there was some one that had come with Ben.
    “ This is my brother Jack. He’s home on leave. I thought that he would like to meet Amber.” Ben said. As he introduced Jack to her family.
    “ Well welcome Jack. Its nice to meet you. Amber probably will want to meet you. That’s if she ever comes out of her room.” David said.
    “ Do you want me to go see how she is doing? I don’t mind helping to get her to come down.” Ben said.
    “ That’s alright. We just sent Rebekah up to check on her.” Eric said.
    “ Come have a seat, while we wait for more people to show up.” David said.

    Ben and Jack sat down on the couch. David and Eric where sat down that long, when the door bell rang.  It was two police men..
    “ Hi. We just stopped by to see how Amber’s doing. To let you know that Kandace and Ron are in the aria.” One of them said.
    “ Ok. We will keep a look out for them. I will let Amber know that you stopped by. She’s doing some what better now. Its still taking some time for her memory to come back.” David said. He had answered the door.
    “ Who was that at the door?” Rebekah had asked. As she came down into the living room.
    “ It was two cops at the door. To let us know that Ron and Kandace are in the aria. They also wanted to know how Amber was doing.” David said. As he went into the living room.
    “ I take it Amber is still in her bed room.” Eric said. When he saw Rebekah.
    “ No. She wasn’t in her room at all. She is probably out in  the back yard.” Rebekah said. She sat down in one of the chairs.
    “ I know that she has always liked the back yard. Maybe we should go out back. Jack may like to see the back yard.” Ben said

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    Little did they know that why they where in side the house. That Amber was being abused out in her rose garden. They had been to busy getting things ready for the party. This was the first time that jack had seen Amber’s rose garden. He had been to her house before, but it had been some time. He had seen every thing else that she has. But when he had been there last,. The rose garden was just going in. It was Amber’s pet project.
    Jack went for a walk in to Amber’s rose garden. While the other’s where setting up every thing. There where also some police men that had come to the party. They where off work. They also wanted to see Amber’s rose garden. The police man where the ones that snuck up be hind Ron. He didn’t even hear them sneaking up on him.
    They had Jack stay by Amber. Just until help could arrive. They didn’t want any thing to happen to her at all. To make sure that she didn’t move at all. That’s if she woke up while help was coming. Jack hopped that Amber wouldn’t wake up at all, if she did that she wouldn’t try to move at all. He was kind of holding her head still, just incase she happened to wake up. Well she happened to wake up on him.

    “ Hey what’s happened?” Amber asked. She was staring at a very nice looking guy. She had woken up.
    “ Well, from the looks of it. You have been beaten up.” Jack said.
    “ Ah, who are you? Do I know who you are?” Amber asked
    “ I don’t know if you know me at all. I’m Ben’s brother Jack. I’m home on leave. I’m also in the Navy. We have met a long time a go.” Jack said. With a very cute smile on his face.
    “ No, IO don’t think that’s where I have seen you before. I just thought that you where my hero from some where. I have seen you in family pictures that Ben has in his office.” Amber said with a smile on  her face.
    “ I can be who ever you want me to be. Just don’t move at all. I believe  that that would be a bad idea to move right now. “ Jack said.
    “ I’ll try not to move at all.” Amber said.
    “ How are you filling?” Jack asked her.
    “ I feel like something hit me real hard. I hurt all over. My legs hurt a whole lot and so do my arms.” Amber said.

    Amber was having a hard time keeping her eyes open. Jack was talking to her, to help keep her calm. He knew that was something that he should do. His mom happened to be an emt. She had taught him some things, when it comes to medical emergences. Jack was doing a pretty good job at it.
    When the paramedics  got there. They where surprised to see how calm They where. His mom was with them and she knew how good he was. Jack was just talking to Amber and keeping her very calm. He was also holding her head still and in place. Making sure that she didn’t move it at all.
    When the paramedics got there. They put a neck brace around Amber’s neck. So that Jack could get out of the way. That way they would be able to do their job. Jack didn’t want to be in their way at all. But Amber wouldn’t let him go to far away from her. Every time that he did, she would start to freak out. Start to go into shock. The paramedics didn’t want Amber to go into shock at all. They put her on a stretcher. So, that she would be laying flat. Wouldn’t try to move at all.
    Amber’s family was staying out of the way of the paramedics. They didn’t want to get in the way at all. They had gone into the garden to see what was going on. The police where still there with Ron in cascade. They weren’t going to let him go this time. Now that they had proof that he was the one that had taken Amber and also hurt her. They finally had a case that they could take to court. He would finally be behind cars. All that they needed was some proof that he was the one that took her.

    “ Please don’t leave me.” Amber said. As she was being lifted in to the ambulance. She was holding jacks hand. It was so that she would not start to freak out at all.
    “ I won’t leave you at all.” Jack said. His mom let him stay by her all of the way to the hospital.
    “ Don’t worry, Amber. He is right her by your side. He is going to hold your hand until we get to the hospital.” Di said. She was in the back of the ambulance.
    “Just hang in there. We will be to the hospital soon. Did I mention that I’m in the Navy?” Jack asked. He was smiling at Amber.
    “ No you didn’t tell me that.” Amber said. She was really having a hard time staying a wake. She was being talked to, to keep her awake. They didn’t want her to slip in to a coma at all.
    “ Well, I am. I have been stationed in Hawaii the past six years. Now, I will be in Virginia for the next three years. “ Jack said. He was starting to fall for Amber’s charm.

    Amber has always had something about her that guys like. She has always been a loving person. She is also a caring person. A lot of guys have always liked hanging out with her. They also likes to perfect her from other people. Amber has always been an easy person to get along with. That is what guys seemed to like about  her. They where able to get along with her. She also like to watch sports game. A whole lot of guys liked that as well. She would even talk about cars as well.
    But right now. She could not remember any of that at all. She seemed not able to remember the things that she used to do. Amber was having a hard time with that. She was also depressed and not her self at all. Her family was worried about  her. They wanted her to be happy for a change. They didn’t know how to help her at all. They where missing the old Amber. Every one was very worried about her. They didn’t know how series of condition that she was in. They where hopping that she would make it threw this and be just fine.

    “ How is she doing?” David asked. When they had all gotten to the hospital.
    “ Well she feel a sleep on the way here. I think that Jack might have put her a sleep.” Di said.
    “ We tried to keep her a wake. I told her all about me. I don’t think that I put her a sleep at all.” Jack said. With a smile on his face.
    “ Well, She was having a hard time staying a wake. I gave her some pain medicine. It probably knocked her out.” Di said.
    “ I hope that she will be alright. I don’t like seeing her like this.” David said.
    “ The doctors will do every thing that they can. She’s in good hands. I know that you are very close to her.” Di said. She knew that David and Amber where close. They had always been that way.
    “ Hi. I’m Dr. Travis. I will be the one taking care of Amber. Right now we are examining her and seeing what kind of damage that she has. She is heavily sedated right now. That way she won’t be in any kind of pain at all. I’ll keep you posted on her.” Dr. Travis said to Amber’s family.
    “ Ok. We will just wait for now. Thanks dr. At least she is in good hands.” Eric said.
    “ I suggest that you chose some one to be the family’s spokes person. Get plenty of rest as well. We don’t want any of you to get sick at all.” Dr. Travis said. Before he went back to Amber.
    “I will be the family spokes person. That way I can keep people up dated on Amber.” David said.
    “ That’s a very good idea. I know that you are close to her. Well I better get back to Amber. I just wanted to introduce my self to you all.” Dr. Travis said. He then went right back to Amber.
    “ Well all that we can do right now, is just wait to hear for any up dates.” Eric said. He had also bee worried about Amber. He was just never as close as David and her. But he was still pretty close to her.
    “ Where are your guys parents? Did they go out of town again.?” Ben asked. He knew that they still didn’t care that much about Amber. They didn’t know that she was back in Utah.
    “ They went out of town. They left before Amber got back here. They are up at their lake resort. I think that they are supposed to be back any day now.” Rebekah said. She knew that they should be there at the hospital with them. But they don’t get phone service where they went.
    “ I think that they will be back tomorrow. They where just making sure that things was running smoothly. They have people that run it for them now. So that they don’t have to be up there all of the time.” Eric said.
    “ That’s right. I forgot that they where out of town. I wonder how that’s going. I haven’t been up there for a while. I have been busy working.” Ben said.
    “ Her parents have a resort? I didn’t know that.” Jack said.
    “ Yup. Its fun spending time there. The fish is really big. I like it there in the winter time. That’s where I try to go for Christmas. I know that our family is going there this Christmas. I have taken time off for that.” Ben said. He was looking forward to that.
    “ I don’t know if I’ll be home for that. It depends when I get my next leave.” Jack said. He didn’t know when that would be. It would at least be six months before he knew, when he would be able to take his next leave.
    “ It would be nice if you could. They decorate it all up in the winter time. I love the way that it looks. I think that you would like it so much.” Ben said. Their mom had left. She was still on call for the night.
    “ Well, I’m going to go. I have to work tomorrow. I could use some sleep. “ Eric said. He had a busy day a head of him.
    “ Well, there’s my husband. I will be back tomorrow. I need to get some sleep.” Rebekah said. As Dustin was stopping the car. He was there to pick up Rebekah from the hospital.
    “ K. I’ll keep you up dated on Amber.” David said. As Rebekah and Eric left the waiting room.

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    “ Poor thing. She didn’t deserve this at all. What do  you think Dr. ?” Nurse Nancy said.
    “ I know. Man the guy that did this, should be in prison for a long time. I think she looks horrible. I would say that she has a lot of damage. Let’s get her put back to get there. “ Dr. Travis said. He didn’t like the way that Amber looked.
    “ She is going to need all of the help that she can get. We are the best team that she can have. Lets get started on finding out all that is wrong with her. What needs to be fixed.” Dr. Paul said. He was helping Dr. Travis with Amber. She had three doctors working on her and a whole bunch of nurses.
    “ Well, she has some internal bleeding. A tone of broken bones. I don’t know where we should start. He really has messed her up pretty badly.” Dr. Jones said.
    “ Lets start of with the internal bleeding and get that stopped. Then work on the bones. Its going to be a long night for all of us. Including her.” Dr. Travis said. He knew that they where going to need a surgeon.
    “ I’ll go page the on call surgeon.” Nurse Nancy said. She went and paged the on call surgeon.
    
    “ I hope that things aren’t that bad. She has been threw so much all ready, she doesn’t need to go threw any thing else.” David said.
    “ I know. She has been threw a lot in New York. Even though she doesn’t remember it at all.” Ben said.
    “ I remember hearing about some one being kidnapped and no one knew where she was. I didn’t realize that it was Amber. Poor thing, missing for three years and now this. She doesn’t need anything else to dill with.” Jack said.
    “ Yup. It was Amber. Now she is dealing with this. Now she deserves a break from this.” David said.

    “ Ok, lets get this bleeding stopped. I hope there isn’t that much damage at all.” Dr. Tom said. He was the on call surgeon.
    “ Let’s open her up and see where all the bleeding is. I hope that we don’t find that much of it. “ Dr. Paul said. He was also a surgeon. But not the chief of surgery.
    They opened her up to see how much internal bleeding that she had. They Knew that  they had to get it to stop before they could fix any thing else. They found quit a bit of bleeding and they got all of it stopped.
    “ She is going to be soar when is all over.” Nurse Nancy said.
    “ Not to mean chin scares. Man he did some really bad damage on her.” Nurse Betty said.
    “ Ok. Now lets fix all of the broken bones..” Dr. Johns said.
    “ There seems to be a lot of broken bones. She will probably need pins and needles to hold them all to gather.” Dr. Travis said. He could tell that some of the breaks didn’t look that good at all.
    “ Well this is going to take a while. So lets get started on this.” Dr. Travis said.
    “ I’m going to go let her family know what’s going on now.” nurse Nancy said. She went out to tell Amber’s family  the progress of things.

    “ Well, so far the internal bleeding is stopped. Now the doctors are working on her broken bones. The doctor will be out to let you know who every thing went.” Nurse Nancy said. She knew how important it was to give an up date on the progress. Most other nurses didn’t even bother to do that at all.
    “ How much internal bleeding was there?” David asked. He was hopping for not that much at all.
    “ There was quit a bit of internal bleeding. Its been all stopped. That’s the good thing. She will be soar for a while.” Nurse Nancy said.
    “ Thanks for the up date on her.” Ben said. He was one of the three that had stayed. They wanted to be there for Amber no matter what.
    “ Your welcome. I’ll send the doctor out when he’s done working on Amber.” Nurse Nancy said. Then she went back in to the operating room.
    “ That’s not good that there was internal bleeding. She will have scares from the stitches.” Jack said.
    “ It sounds to me that he didn’t want any guy to want her. That’s not good at all. She deserves to have a nice happy life. She needs a good break in her life. Not to have any more problems in her life.” David said. He didn’t want to see his own sister be miserable. He wanted her to be happy all of the time.
    “ Well, she seems like a very nice person. I loved talking to her. I don’t care about the way that she looks. That’s not what matters to me. Its what’s in the inside that matters to me.” Jack said. He was tired of being single. He wanted to have some one in his life.
    “ He’s been single for far to long. For some reason girls don’t want to date him. That’s why I brought him over. So that they could meet. He’s only a year older then Amber.” Ben said. He didn’t want to date Amber at all He wanted some one else in his life. He dating some one else.
    “ I don’t see why any girl wouldn’t want to have him. He seems very nice.” David said. He could tell when some one was just right for Amber.

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    “ Woo. What a nice trip. I wonder if Amber is finally back home.” Tom said. They had just gotten home. It was the morning.
    “ I hope so to. I would like to see her. I haven’t seen her for three years. “ Trina said. She kind of missed her daughter.
    “ Well, we should un pack are stuff. See what every one is up to.” Tom said.
    They where at their house. That was down from Amber’s. They didn’t live that far apart at all. They liked having Amber live close to them. So, that she could do stuff for them all of the time. They seemed to take advantage of her. They didn’t care that they did. The rest of them did care about how they treated her. They didn’t like the way that they treated her.
    “ Hi mom and dad. How was the trip? Did you guys have a nice time?” Rebekah asked. She was over at their house. She was there to water the plants that they have.
    “ Yes it was a nice trip. We had fun on the trip. Its nice to not have to work at all any more. Things are running just fine.” Tom said. He seemed happy for a change. He liked to be out of town and up in the mountains.
    “ That’s good. Well, I have something to tell you guys. So you might want to sit down for this.” Rebekah said. She chose to be the one to tell them about Amber.
    “ Well what is wrong. Did something happen while we where gone.” Trina said. Se didn’t take bad new that good at all.
    “ Well to start with. Amber is back in Utah. She has been here or a couple of weeks. She doesn’t remember any thing at all. That’s the good news. The bad news is, she in the hospital. She was beat up really bad last night. David has all of the up dates of how she is doing. He stayed at the hospital all night long.” Rebekah said. She didn’t know how they would take what she had just told them.
    They where shocked to hear that Amber is in the hospital. They didn’t like the fact that she had no memory at all. They decided to unload their car and head strait to the hospital. Rebekah was an-chi’s to hear the up date on Amber. She had left to get some sleep.

    “ Hi, how is she doing?” Rebekah asked. As she walked up to David. He looked really tired.
    “ Hi mom and dad. They got the internal bleeding stopped during the night. They are still working on all of the broken bones that she has. I didn’t get much sleep at all.” David said.
    “ What about Ben and jack? Did they leave or are they still here?” Rebekah asked. She didn’t know if they had stayed after she had left.
    “ They stayed the whole night. They went to get something to eat. When they get back, then I’l
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Have to tell you, honestly no one would care for a rich little girls personal problems with saying no. This book, story or whatever is a bore, it is shamefully less interesting than "The gassman" (a guy that lives at a gass station and falls in love). Not even romance people would like this.<br />
I am sorry for saying this but your writing is not interesting.<br />
Though I give you credit for making it more interesting than the story "Taken by the woman", which is a total drag. You might be a new kind of writter like the one who wrote that story though, so if anything, you will draw the people who wish to be extreme. Go for a extreme book and you'll be published sooner or later. I guess though that people like me would never touch the book. Good luck though.

GO FOR IT LADY YOU REALLY HAVE TALENT

hey dont worry about the spelling mistakes. i am dyxlica and i am a published author!<br />
dont let anyone smash your dreams. i had people telling me about spell check and all that but when you have a learning disablity or you just cant spell dont worry thats what the publishers job is the corrections of spelling ,grammer and all that . I belive you can write ! i read it i liked it . reach for your dreams you will never know till you give it a shot . and i can give you a little pointers on getting a publishing co . just email me on here . iam working on my second book ; THE SHADES OF GRACE 2 . Its about 20 years of abuse that i went threw . my first book got published last aug. i tell you its the greatest feeling being a published author !! Just GO FOR IT!!! GOOD LUCK your friend KARLA REEVES

hey dont worry about the spelling mistakes. i am dyxlica and i am a published author!<br />
dont let anyone smash your dreams. i had people telling me about spell check and all that but when you have a learning disablity or you just cant spell dont worry thats what the publishers job is the corrections of spelling ,grammer and all that . I belive you can write ! i read it i liked it . reach for your dreams you will never know till you give it a shot . and i can give you a little pointers on getting a publishing co . just email me on here . iam working on my second book ; THE SHADES OF GRACE 2 . Its about 20 years of abuse that i went threw . my first book got published last aug. i tell you its the greatest feeling being a published author !! Just GO FOR IT!!! GOOD LUCK your friend KARLA REEVES

Its been fixed sense I posted this. I used a dictionary to help with the spelling. I still don't know if I want this story published. Its a privet story. That I don't know what to name at all.

Constructive Criticism: 1: your spelling......2: your sentences are to......simple. I'm not trying to be mean and hurt your feelings but i think if this is something your're serious about you want to follow some basics that might help you. Find out your genra then find published SUCCESSFUL authours in that genra and read their stories. Always look in your work not at your work, be a spectator, play this as a movie and keep the details full and gripping. I'm not the best at writing either but my problem is writers block because I refuse to put the average on paper you have to make your work stand out. Goodluck and never let anyone detour you from your dream