If Someone Do Not Mind

Could any of you read some of my works and tell me if it looks good? It is only my online stuff, and what I consider to be my free tales and poems, I sorta hope that someone might tell me how I am as a writter.

This is my blog;

I got my stuff there, and I know it is not much work, most of my work I never have put online, so... this is only a little, I hope it is enough to tell me if I might get a book published or not.
Barlong Barlong
26-30, F
May 14, 2012