Storie Writing Improvement

Hi everyone, I was wondering if some one might be able to point out some good resources that I could use to help me improve writing stories. I struggle every time I write a stories because I end up saying things along the line "and this happen, then this and this". Every time I read one part of my store it sounds terrible. Not very visual on paper (when I reread it later on, so like the people don't come to life), but in my mind the whole world is planed out, inc the stories.

MorganWhitten MorganWhitten
18-21, M
2 Responses May 16, 2012 is a wonderful site to learn about writing. Also read and study good books that are in the same genre you are writing in.<br />
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The only way to get better at writing is to keep writing. The only way, to for sure fail, is to stop writing. Good luck.

look up teen writing sites. there a few good ones out there:)